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Spyder bites

Postby _Steven_ » Apr 7th, '12, 04:44

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so im drunk and wrote these real quick, nothing amazing, but watch out for the audio of some harder hitting shit soon!

and for the record i wasn't even gonna go in but this dude uses other artists punches and changes them slightly lol. biting ass :shakehead:

incy wincy spider bitch
went and bit rhyme asylums shit,
ill show you just how live it gets,
when i staple my dick to your eyelids bitch,
see you went and pissed me off,
and everyone knows that this kid wears bras,
you better back off you aint got a choice,
gonna come at me with your grownup bart simpson voice??
i was like damn when i heard the immortal tape,
sounding like a fucking cats been raped,
spyder for you to ever be dope on the mic,
better get someone else to spit the shit that you write,
claiming this is your time been here since 09,
i would say your past it but you never had an optimus,
beat 3 times by anonymous, and cried into your man tittys,
for you to run shit, id start with a marathon in your damn city,
your a chubby recluse, always quick to come with a sudden excuse,
i see where you bit joe buddens end rhymes too.

So ill wait for yet another response, which i hope doesn't contain biting from other artists.
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Re: Spyder bites

Postby BigBoss » Apr 7th, '12, 06:06

Came in expecting ANOTHER diss at spyder tbqfh
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Re: Spyder bites

Postby _Steven_ » Apr 7th, '12, 11:50

BigBoss wrote:Came in expecting ANOTHER diss at spyder tbqfh


Your point?
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Re: Spyder bites

Postby CrashBand » Apr 8th, '12, 17:12

this was pretty dope I thought. Especially for an unplanned, drunken attack.
I'm not tryin to be rude, but I sincerely wanna fuck the taste out of your mouth
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Re: Spyder bites

Postby BILI » Apr 8th, '12, 18:30

If u put "prime" instead of "time" it would go so much better with "optimus". Other then that this was nice
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Re: Spyder bites

Postby _Steven_ » Apr 8th, '12, 18:34

BILI wrote:If u put "prime" instead of "time" it would go so much better with "optimus". Other then that this was nice



haha thanks BILI. :y:
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