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Strictt Ame - "Lace Up"

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Strictt Ame - "Lace Up"

Postby Strictt Ame » Apr 6th, '12, 04:24

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Im gonna be recording this the next chance I get, and just incase you didnt know, the verses are double time

Strictt Ame – “Lace Up”
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Im back and Im dealin it, hear the beat Im killin it
Bitches feelin it, hook line n sinker, reel em in
See Gods blessin me, the recipe to wreck emcees
Im the dude losin never sees, it’s a necessity
Especially with all these fuckin problems that be stressin me
People be tellin me, ya better off to let it be
But if I did, its evident that yall would think less of me
My life is all warfare so I let the weapons free
Cuz Ill be damned if these haters get the best of me
I possess accessories, to build my own legacy
Got the game in a choke hold, never let it breathe
The sons gonna reign, no matter what the weather be
I take another percocet, yes Im a nervous wreck
But I came to earn respect cuz I aint sevred my purpose yet
Give a fuck about ya worthless rep, man Ill merk ya set
Stack the cards in my favor and, no I wont return the deck

[Hook: 2x]
I do me, wont listen to you fake fucks
My crew be, ready so lets lace up (lace up)
Ride the hi hats as I let the bass bump
Face us, you ready then lets lace up (lace up)

Now the actions begun, play the track n just run
Im a traveling boxer, Im packin a punch
Say you sendin bullets, I laugh cuz its dumb
The impact in my lungs will blow em back in ya gun
You faggots are done, now back to the double time
We livin in these troubled times, but I got a troubled mind
So I’ll fit right in, I cant get enough of crime
Homie don’t bluff ya grind..
Say you flippin pounds but you really only puffin dimes
Nothin but frontin lies..(10)
Im tired of you other guys, listen how I do it bitch
Im fluent with putrid spits, you just say some stupid shit
Stupid does what stupid is, I never knew how true it is
Until I showed this ruthlessness, chewed through a group of kids
They saw how I do it big, so they start pursuin it
But I do my own thing, I’ll never let you ruin it
This what the movement is, no its no illusion bitch

[Hook: 2x]
I do me, wont listen to you fake fucks
My crew be, ready so lets lace up (lace up)
Ride the hi hats as I let the bass bump
Face us, you ready then lets lace up (lace up)

Listen how I make it sound, take then I break it down
I aint tryin to play around, I hear what ya sayin clown
But it cant phase me now, go ahead spray a round
I treat bullets like bad bitches, so I go n lay em down
Got ya body shakin now, everything I say profound
Me to you? That’s tradin down, Ame got the greatest style
That’s why he takes the crown, now go and get a sick scheme
Cuz you’ll get ate twice when I spit a sixteen
All ya disses missed me, get some better elements
They suck the way you tellin em, make em more relevant
Ya rhymes sit on the bench, cuz aint nobody pressin em
Beatin me? You gotta better chance to lift an elephant
Im far too clever its used as my leverage
Don’t care what you think about me, fuck what your impression is
Fact is Im better bitch, wretched with them wreckin hits
Class is in session kids, and heres what the lesson is..

[Hook: 2x]
I do me, wont listen to you fake fucks
My crew be, ready so lets lace up (lace up)
Ride the hi hats as I let the bass bump
Face us, you ready then lets lace up (lace up)
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Re: Strictt Ame - "Lace Up"

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Apr 8th, '12, 02:08

Wow, This is FIRE! Great Inners, Awesome Multis. By far one of the best writtens I have seen in the Creative Writing section so far!! Way to Go dude, Keep tearing it up!
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Re: Strictt Ame - "Lace Up"

Postby Strictt Ame » Apr 8th, '12, 03:25

Thanks bro..and if you like the written that much I have a good feeling you'll love the audio when I get it finished
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Re: Strictt Ame - "Lace Up"

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Apr 8th, '12, 03:45

yeah man for sure! Do you post in the Audio Section? Ill check it out.
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Re: Strictt Ame - "Lace Up"

Postby Strictt Ame » Apr 8th, '12, 04:01

I dont have any recent tracks..I havent recorded for awhile..but my most recent stuff is on my page (link in my sig "My Music") feel free to check it out and you can kinda get a feel for what I can do
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Re: Strictt Ame - "Lace Up"

Postby _Steven_ » Apr 8th, '12, 12:06

Strictt, if this flows as well as it does in my head on double time then wow, brilliantly written, theres a lot of clever metaphors in there and you kept the multis consistent throughout obviously allowing the flow to be as good as it can be, are you doing the hook slower than the verses? cause to me it sounds even better if you flow them down (well slower than the verses) but obviously its however you choose to do it. pretty sick man, its nice to read these type of verses from you, its more of a rarity because i only see you doing battle types haha. but i liked it a lot. keep it up bro
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Re: Strictt Ame - "Lace Up"

Postby Strictt Ame » Apr 8th, '12, 19:03

Yeh I go a bit slower on the hooks..and I do more than just battle stuff lol, I just prefer battle types cuz I like punches and what not..but I recorded this track today, gonna mix and master it tomorrow and should have it up in the next couple days
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