Strictt Ame - "The Madness"

[Strictt Ame]

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Track I just finished writing..not my usual punches and metaphors, but Im satisfied with the outcome, let me know what you think (words in italics are done in double time btw)

Beat: Rock-It Pro - "The Madness" (http://www.rockitpro.com)

I don’t do this music shit just for your amusement kid
I use it to soothe an itch so I don’t go N shoot a bitch
You just think its humorous but you don’t how true it is
Find it funny when I diss a girl, I really knew the bitch
Great now the fuse is lit, so I gotta speak her name
No I don’t but shes to blame, for makin me insane
Made my heart seize in vain, then the treason came
I had to leave the dame, shit’ll never be the same
People sayin Jesus Ame, you in a heap of pain
Im free now, so why do I feel like its me in chains
See the reasons plain, in my lyrics heat remains
But when it comes to relationships, I cant keep a flame
Im feelin so weak N lame, even as the seasons change
Shits got me enraged, so the ink bleeds the page
Im so..clever when I rip it, there aint none better when I spit it
I got no love for the bitches, oh-no they’re never gonna get it
Oh-no Im never gonna risk it, Id rather pull the lever on a biscuit
Than peddle in the business, of leveling with bitches
See that’s the quick attack, mixed with a hint of fact
Show you where the sickness at, Im the sickest cat
With the slickest raps, Jehovah’s wanna Witness that
I don’t care where the trick is at, but Ill bring her back
This is Ame’s fight, and I don’t play nice
With a story about a slut that tried to play wife
Oh..your not slut, well let me get this straight right
In the last 2 years you been married plus engaged twice
So if what ya says right, then that’s a great lie
Shouldve put my emotions aside and gave you straight pipe
Instead of stayin on the phone with you in the late night
Expect me to make nice, this aint date night
We could’ve been a great sight, but you made me hate life
So you gotta feel the wrath, and taste what my fates like
What you want me to hang with ya boo, fuck that shit I aint changin for you
Go ahead complain to ya dude, what the fucks that ape gonna do
Nothing he too tame for the zoo, that dude Strictt Ame is the truth
When I hang in the booth like a bat and put these fangs into you
Im sayin Im an animal, lyrical cannibal
Misunderstandable, eatin brains like Hannibal
With some fava beans and a nice chianti (key-anti)
Kinda dark it seems, ya likely cant see
But I can see you, right above the lies
And tonight is the night that the love, it dies
Go and fool them other guys, come up with some other lies
What? Give us another try, see if we can touch the sky
Maybe in another life, one where Im in love with dikes
Not this one, Id rather die, come back N get smothered twice
See what we had was beautiful, truth be told magic
But then you did a back flip, made this shit tragic
Amplified the sadness and turned me to a savage
Devastated, ravaged and this is the madness
This is the madness, this is the madness
But Im here, I persevered, so fuck you faggots
This is the madness, this is the madness
I wont fall for your shit again, fuck a bad bitch
This is the madness, this is the madness
You just a backstabber, so fuck it he can have it
This is the madness, this is the madness
Fuck you and fuck you too..MADNESS

[_Steven_]

The best piece of yours i have ever read. i can relate a lot to it and you wrote it amazingly,

Im free now, so why do I feel like its me in chains

^ that bar was dope as fuck in my opinion, i love how you incorporate meta's so easily, damn so easily sometimes its easy to miss them,

multis were great through-out.

[Strictt Ame]

Thanks man, really appreciate it

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

DAMNN dude, Everything I have read from you is great man, this piece was a really awesome change in style, you didnt sacrifice content for rhymes, multis were killer through the whole piece. Looks like you put a lot of work into this one, keep it up man!! looking forward to your next one!

[Strictt Ame]

DAMNN dude, Everything I have read from you is great man, this piece was a really awesome change in style, you didnt sacrifice content for rhymes, multis were killer through the whole piece. Looks like you put a lot of work into this one, keep it up man!! looking forward to your next one!

Thanks for the feed man, its greatly appreciated

Im uploading this track right now, I went ahead and put it down like an hour ago..hope yall enjoy

[CrashBand]

As people have said. Very good man.

Rhyming and flow are Top notch!

I loved the double time.

And wordplay is pretty darn good and comes off really effortless. Which is a great accomplishment.

"keep me in chains" that line in itself was great wordplay. But then the next two line "heat remains" "keep a flame"
continued the multie chain AND were awesome wordplay aswell.

Props man

[Strictt Ame]

Thanks man, appreciate it