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Postby > Evil _ MoNkEy < » May 21st, '06, 02:25

The end



So many things left unsaid
so much pain and confusion
countless tears that I
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Postby kait » May 21st, '06, 03:55

It's pretty good. Good Job. :D
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Postby > Evil _ MoNkEy < » May 21st, '06, 11:27

Sarah wrote:Awwwwww :( Anna you okay? :hug:


no im not..... its over :'( :loudcry: its fuckin over and i wanna die :loudcry:
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Postby AspirinE » May 21st, '06, 11:30

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Aww cmon anna cheer up... :p

Nice poem
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Postby > Evil _ MoNkEy < » May 21st, '06, 11:32

AspirinE wrote:Image

Aww cmon anna cheer up... :p

Nice poem


thats not funny.... fuck emo jokes..... and i dont.... o fuck it.... nvmd

everyones like, nice poem... fuck that... it aint suposed to be nice.... and i dont fuckin cut myself
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Postby > Evil _ MoNkEy < » May 21st, '06, 11:40

~Clarky~ wrote:What's over??????????



um.... my relationship... my life.... my world...... and all becu of me.... im the worlds biggest fuck up
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Postby > Evil _ MoNkEy < » May 21st, '06, 11:44

~Clarky~ wrote:
> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:
~Clarky~ wrote:What's over??????????



um.... my relationship... my life.... my world...... and all becu of me.... im the worlds biggest fuck up


With the guy on the net ? :unsure:



ya.... dont ask... please
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Postby sinemm » May 21st, '06, 11:45

yeah good congs. :)
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Postby Inzanity » May 21st, '06, 11:48

> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:
~Clarky~ wrote:What's over??????????



um.... my relationship... my life.... my world...... and all becu of me.... im the worlds biggest fuck up


I know wat that feels like to break up wit some1 u really care about it fuckin' suck. That poem was real deep though. I'm sorry to hear about ur break up. :console:
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Postby > Evil _ MoNkEy < » May 21st, '06, 11:50

EmptyPromises wrote:
> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:
~Clarky~ wrote:What's over??????????



um.... my relationship... my life.... my world...... and all becu of me.... im the worlds biggest fuck up


I know wat that feels like to break up wit some1 u really care about it fuckin' suck. That poem was real deep though. I'm sorry to hear about ur break up. :console:


its ok... i fucked things up myself... and thanx... i poured my heart into it
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Postby > Evil _ MoNkEy < » May 21st, '06, 11:53

~Clarky~ wrote:Did you even ever meet this guy?


no.... but i was goin to.... i had plans and dreams, and now its all over.... i really loved him... and ive never loved anyone b4...... it hurts.... now i never will get to see him :(
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Postby Inzanity » May 21st, '06, 11:57

~Clarky~ wrote:
> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:
~Clarky~ wrote:Did you even ever meet this guy?


no.... but i was goin to.... i had plans and dreams, and now its all over.... i really loved him... and ive never loved anyone b4...... it hurts.... now i never will get to see him :(


How do you love someone you never met?


mabey it was his personality dude mabey they talked for a while and they got to know alot about eachother and she fell in love hey man it's possible shit like that happens all the time
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Postby > Evil _ MoNkEy < » May 21st, '06, 11:58

~Clarky~ wrote:
> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:
~Clarky~ wrote:Did you even ever meet this guy?


no.... but i was goin to.... i had plans and dreams, and now its all over.... i really loved him... and ive never loved anyone b4...... it hurts.... now i never will get to see him :(


How do you love someone you never met?



thats wat i thought.... but, u know.... i guess i really cant say.... i dont know how, but i did.... and i still do.... and it hurts.... he was my first love
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Postby AspirinE » May 21st, '06, 11:59

> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:
~Clarky~ wrote:
> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:
~Clarky~ wrote:Did you even ever meet this guy?


no.... but i was goin to.... i had plans and dreams, and now its all over.... i really loved him... and ive never loved anyone b4...... it hurts.... now i never will get to see him :(


How do you love someone you never met?



thats wat i thought.... but, u know.... i guess i really cant say.... i dont know how, but i did.... and i still do.... and it hurts.... he was my first love



You didnt let him hit dat in one of them sex convos did you?
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Postby kait » May 21st, '06, 18:32

I'm sorry to hear that you're heart-broken. But don't stress over some guy on the internet. There are plenty of other good people still that you can actually meet and get to know. Feel Better. :flower:
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