Strictt Ame- "The Madness"

[Strictt Ame]

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Lyrics:

I don’t do this music shit just for your amusement kid
I use it to soothe an itch so I don’t go N shoot a bitch
You just think its humorous but you don’t how true it is
Find it funny when I diss a girl, I really knew the bitch
Great now the fuse is lit, so I gotta speak her name
No I don’t but shes to blame, for makin me insane
Made my heart seize in vain, then the treason came
I had to leave the dame, shit’ll never be the same
People sayin Jesus Ame, you in a heap of pain
Im free now, so why do I feel like its me in chains
See the reasons plain, in my lyrics heat remains
But when it comes to relationships, I cant keep a flame
That shit I wont seek again, I’ll just keep to strange
Oh believe it mane, bitches I don’t need to claim
Im feelin so weak N lame, even as the seasons change
Shits got me enraged, so the ink bleeds the page
Im so..clever when I rip it, there aint none better when I spit it
I got no love for the bitches, oh-no they’re never gonna get it
Oh-no Im never gonna risk it, Id rather pull the lever on a biscuit
Than peddle in the business, of leveling with bitches
See that’s the quick attack, mixed with a hint of fact
Show you where the sickness at, Im the sickest cat
With the slickest raps, Jehovah’s wanna Witness that
I don’t care where the trick is at, but Ill bring her back
This is Ame’s fight, and I don’t play nice
With a story about a slut that tried to play wife
Oh..your not slut, well let me get this straight right
The last 2 years you been married plus engaged twice
So if what you says right, then that’s a great lie
Shouldve put my emotions aside and gave you straight pipe
Instead of stayin on the phone with you in the late night
Expect me to make nice, this aint date night
We could’ve been a great sight, but you made me hate life
So you gotta feel the wrath, and taste what my fates like
What you want me to hang with ya boo, fuck that shit I aint changin for you
Go ahead complain to ya dude, what the fucks that ape gonna do
Nothing he too tame for the zoo, that dude Strictt Ame is the truth
When I hang in the booth like a bat and put these fangs into you
Im sayin Im an animal, lyrical cannibal
Misunderstandable, eatin brains like Hannibal
With some fava beans and a nice chianti (key-anti)
Kinda dark it seems, ya likely cant see
But I can see you, right above the lies
And tonight is the night that the love, it dies
Go and fool them other guys, come up with some other lies
What? Give us another try, see if we can touch the sky
Maybe in another life, one where Im in love with dikes
Not this one, Id rather die, come back N get smothered twice
What we had was beautiful, truth be told magic
Then you did a back flip, made this shit tragic
Amplified the sadness, turned me to a savage
Devastated, ravaged and this is the madness
This is the madness, this is the madness
But Im here, I persevered, so fuck you faggots
This is the madness, this is the madness
I wont fall for your shit again, fuck a bad bitch
This is the madness, this is the madness
You just a backstabber, fuck it he can have it
This is the madness, this is the madness
Fuck you and fuck you too..MADNESS

[Instant Legend]

i went ahead ad checked out "Final Destination": A pretty cool track. Sounds like you're still getting your bearings about you with the flow, comin along nicely - like the beat you chose to work with, and you delivered a few cool lines as well. not a bad drop homie - let me know when Madness goes live

in the meantime, check me out on some new shit:

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[Strictt Ame]

Thanks bro, Final Destination is from February 2010..and Ill find a way around it to get The Madness up..cuz I think its hot as fuck lol

[Strictt Ame]

ok, The Madness is back up..click the link with "PLAY" all around it lol..thanks yall

[Spyder]

voice sounds a little low, try using some overlays and stuff to make some parts stick out.
lyrics are good, i like your punch stuff better so this wasnt my cup of tea from you but still decent.
flow sounds nice you know what your doing, some parts it sounded like you coulda had some more syllables
to make it flow smoother, like the switch to double, shoulda made that part longer tbh.
your delivery kinda sounds like a southern rapper but u have no accent really. i know your from NO
but never noticed it i guess.
good add a little more emphasis to your voice, but maybe as i said before if vocals were a tad louder and
had overlays it may take away that problem

in all pretty nice track dude, nice beat too

[gutawafang]

Voice abit soft. Could have had a little more layers, like effects to emphasize some visual parts in the lyrics. You killed it with the lyrics, no doubt. this is madness indeed. Good job.