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Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby cityfan31 » Apr 20th, '12, 14:26

If you're from the south you can almost get away from it, although they still sound like wannabes.

Up north you just sound like a muppet. There's no getting away from that fact. It just doesn't work.

Ed Sheeran does his own thing, and he's a singer mainly.
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Solace » Apr 20th, '12, 22:34

Well I wouldn't know so I'll take it from you. And yeah, but when he raps he still has such a wonderful delivery :flutter:
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Mahmoud48 » Apr 21st, '12, 19:16

lyrics were great but its so loud and i feel like the flow is generic
im not into that kind of flow but it doesnt mean its bad
i agree with people it the instrumental should be louder
but i love the mastering i wish i knew how to master
ODD FUTURE ASAP OVOXO BLACK HIPPY GOOD MUSIC
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Solace » Apr 21st, '12, 19:31

Thanks for listening Mahmoud

And for the record there's absolutely no mastering lmao.
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby B.A.D. » May 3rd, '12, 02:17

wow, different delivery on this one, never heard you with this style before.... not bad

maybe a little bit of volume issues on the mixing, I would've suggest you add a stronger compressor at the end so you can limit the volume a little bit while maintaining good volume.

never-the-less, great lyrics...
keep it up man, nice to see you tryng a variety of styles
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby TripleNineThree » May 3rd, '12, 18:58

Beat - I'm not a fan of it but you do it justice - 8/10

Delivery - This was great. You have great verbal presence. - 10/10

Flow - Sounds good for the most part, notice some slip ups but not enough to comment on - 8.5/10

Lyrics - These were also really good, I enjoyed them - 9/10

Overall - 9/10 - Goodjob man!

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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Solace » May 6th, '12, 15:26

TripleNineThree wrote:Beat - I'm not a fan of it but you do it justice - 8/10

Delivery - This was great. You have great verbal presence. - 10/10

Flow - Sounds good for the most part, notice some slip ups but not enough to comment on - 8.5/10

Lyrics - These were also really good, I enjoyed them - 9/10

Overall - 9/10 - Goodjob man!

Do you mind returning the feed? - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=145021


Great verbal presence? :flutter: Thank you. :worship: Glad you enjoyed it dude. I peeped your track, and left a comment there. :y: I appreciate the listen man.

B.A.D. wrote:wow, different delivery on this one, never heard you with this style before.... not bad

maybe a little bit of volume issues on the mixing, I would've suggest you add a stronger compressor at the end so you can limit the volume a little bit while maintaining good volume.

never-the-less, great lyrics...
keep it up man, nice to see you tryng a variety of styles

One of the most annoying has returned :smoking: Thanks for listening. Why do you specifically point out the end? I figure the next time I drop a track (if you're active here) I'll send it to you before hand and ask if the volume levels are alright (those are suuch a bitch to get correct). Thanks for listening, again, lol.
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Block » May 6th, '12, 22:41

How long did you study my rhyme schemes?

Your quality and flow got a lot better. Good job.
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Solace » May 6th, '12, 22:50

Block wrote:How long did you study my rhyme schemes?

Well, 17 years.

Block wrote:Your quality and flow got a lot better. Good job.

Thanks. :y:
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Le Tunisien » May 7th, '12, 01:12

yo yo yoo that was dope, im actually impressed with the delivery you used and i really enjoyed the lyrics mean the multis and content was good i like it, but maan its a PITY that you didnt finish it correctly with a good hook and 2 other verses , it would be awesome .. keep it up :y:
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Instant Legend » May 7th, '12, 07:23

this is pretty good - u definitely brought the energy and mic presence, like the rhyme scheme youre workin with and ya got some good lines worked in there too - yeah, this is somethin i can fuck with, kinda remind me of the homie epitaph

keep it movin duke

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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Cookzee » Jun 14th, '12, 14:13

i liked this, im not gonna lie, i thought it was dope, at points it sounded a little forced but it was still awesome! keep it up :)
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