Eedee - New Beginning LP [Album]

[mdemaz]

1. The World

That was pretty cool, I couldn't really find anything wrong with with
your flow and delivery, the mixing needs some work on each track is all.

2. Get Ready

A bit over the top is you ask me, but it's a lot better than the EP version.

3. No Remorse

Interesting, cool flow.

4. Never

Good voice and flow.

5. Live Life

That is much better, you nailed that shit.

6. Trust

Hmm, interesting, there's not much that I can say.

7. Nasty

HAHAHA, that was fucked up man.

8. This Is War

Cool flow, you definitely improved dramatically overall.

9. Evil Genius

Hah.

10. I'm Sorry

Dope, but you screw up a few times.

11. Dear God

Haha, nice concept.

12. Last Night

Weird, but, it's ok.

13. So Lonely

So yeah, this is the best song I've heard from you to date.

14. In The Silence

Cool.

15 You're Not Good Enough For Me

Wow, such intensity.

16. Pictures

Epic track really.

17. I'm Gonna Make It

Uplifting and funny.

18. New Beginning

Cool track, again, there's not much I can say.

That's great, I hate judging people by listening to a few bad drops, I like to see them improve.

And you have improved.
Good work dude, if you need any help mixing these tracks, don't be afraid to ask me.

I sorta felt like the production was just really rushed, the vocals
lacked warmth and it sounds like some dude was just recording a song and
hitting stop and pressing play on the next track to record the next
track.

It seemed like there was no effort in the mixing process, it was just copy and paste shit most of the time.

Anyway, great improvement, ask for help during the mixing process.

[Eedee]

Thanks for feed, Mat. I appreciate it.

[mdemaz]

Thanks for waiting half a month to say that.
Lolololol.

I think you should focus more on delivery now actually, fuck mixing, have you heard songs by Mike Shinoda and Nas?
Try something like that but mix it up.

A good delivery also makes you not get bored with rapping, as your voice sounds different from what you usually hear.

[Eedee]

Thanks for waiting half a month to say that.
Lolololol.

I think you should focus more on delivery now actually, fuck mixing, have you heard songs by Mike Shinoda and Nas?
Try something like that but mix it up.

A good delivery also makes you not get bored with rapping, as your voice sounds different from what you usually hear.

It's a bump without really bumping

Anyway, yeah, I'll definitely go for delivery - and try to improve my flow. And try to rhyme more, you can always try to rhyme more

I have a few beats to work with right now, so I'll get started on that - wanna feature in one of them dude? I might make a small EP soon, you can be on it if you want.

[mdemaz]

Yeah man, I'm plowing through all this work now, I think I'll have time for one measly verse.

[Eedee]

Ight. I'll hit you up with the beat soon. I'll try to pick one that'll suit you and me.