Redzek - Never Wished (NEW SINGLE OFF "No Shame")

[Le Tunisien]

havent dropped in a long time , so i was finishin songs for my tape called " No Shame" that will feature big ax-d, kez,random ghost and maybe some other features.. i'll hopefully drop it on june,i hope you guys enjoy this song all feedback is appreciate it

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ipd2KZ3sl5c





(previous feedback link : viewtopic.php?f=38&t=142426)

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

I liked it man! there was good rhyming throughout the whole thing and a lot of emotion. The only thing I would say is to try to speak clearer like you did in the chorus, the verses are kind of hard to understand if you didnt have the lyrics on the screen. good job man! keep it up!

[Le Tunisien]

I liked it man! there was good rhyming throughout the whole thing and a lot of emotion. The only thing I would say is to try to speak clearer like you did in the chorus, the verses are kind of hard to understand if you didnt have the lyrics on the screen. good job man! keep it up!

thanks alot man your feedback is appreciated im glad you liked the rhyming and liked it as a whole and yeah thanks for your advice

[Ticalrecords]

i agree with the other guy, your enunciation is really holding you back, its actually REALLY hard to understand loll, no offense you sound mush mouthed the whole time. toher than that tho your flow was on point i was impressed and i liked the melody of the chorus alot it reminded me of What Can I Do by Scarface, if youve ever heard that song...anyways keep it up man.

mind returning the favor?

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[Le Tunisien]

i agree with the other guy, your enunciation is really holding you back, its actually REALLY hard to understand loll, no offense you sound mush mouthed the whole time. toher than that tho your flow was on point i was impressed and i liked the melody of the chorus alot it reminded me of What Can I Do by Scarface, if youve ever heard that song...anyways keep it up man.

mind returning the favor?

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=144617

aight aighttt , thanks man

[B.A.D.]

hey man, glad to see you still at it

like previous people said, your flow and lyrics are great actually, great technique plus not abusive in lyricism, its nice. But your mixing and overall quality of sound is horrible man, you desperately need to fix that!

make sure you do anything possible to fix it, its not that hard.
Get a better recording space, like a closet or something....
Make sure you have a good sound card in your computer/laptop
get a decent microphone, even if its USB for less that 100$
use headphones when recording
learn to mix properly.

hope this helped man, and Im looking forward for that tape. Make sure you let me know which track from me you are gonna be using

[Le Tunisien]

hey man, glad to see you still at it

like previous people said, your flow and lyrics are great actually, great technique plus not abusive in lyricism, its nice. But your mixing and overall quality of sound is horrible man, you desperately need to fix that!

make sure you do anything possible to fix it, its not that hard.
Get a better recording space, like a closet or something....
Make sure you have a good sound card in your computer/laptop
get a decent microphone, even if its USB for less that 100$
use headphones when recording
learn to mix properly.

hope this helped man, and Im looking forward for that tape. Make sure you let me know which track from me you are gonna be using

thanks maaan, and yeaah i know im goin to fix it my friend already got some 300$ mic and we'r goin to buy an external sound card and will start recording but this tape ill release it like that,and yeah im prolly gonna use MAN UP the one with ur chorus for the promo tape and our last one we did ill use it for no shame

[mdemaz]

Nice.
I suggest you try a different delivery though, do some Nas stuff maybe, because that might fit your voice better.

Cool vocal stacking too, that shit isn't easy, but only do that when you think you can pull it off without it sounding jumbled, because it managed to sound jumbled sometimes.

[TripleNineThree]

Beat - Nice and serious, I enjoy these types of beats - 9.5/10

Delivery - This is good for the most part, the only thing I notice off is your accent but that's probably just because I'm not use to it - 7/10

Flow - This is good for the most part, there was a few places you fell of though - 8/10

Lyrics - I really enjoyed these, I could tell that it was a deep track from your lyrical content - 9.5/10

Mixing/Quality - This could be upped. Better mixing would make your words more clear and help make your accent sound better. The quality could also be upped which I know isn't the easiest if you have to buy a new mic. Maybe on the mixing side of things, mess around with some new reverb, compressors, EQs, ect.. until it sounds more professional - 7/10

Overall it was a good track, I enjoyed it man, keep it up! - 8.5/10

Do you mind returning the feed? Thanks! - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=145021

[Solace]

Damn it bitch, get a better mic!

Haha, I like your flow dude. Very consistent. You've improved heaps, but your quality is still shit. The chorus was really dope, it could have been improved with some panning possibly because it felt a little dry for the hook of the track. We gotta hop on another track when you get a better mic (even though I'm still working with a crap mic :s ). The only problem with this track for me with all things considered is your enunciation, which others have brought up, and it wasn't even that bad. Keep it up man. If you get time, peep this track for me viewtopic.php?f=38&t=144413 . I don't think you've heard how I sound in a while (maybe since Lay to Rest?) so lol this should give a decent picture

[Le Tunisien]

Nice.
I suggest you try a different delivery though, do some Nas stuff maybe, because that might fit your voice better.

Cool vocal stacking too, that shit isn't easy, but only do that when you think you can pull it off without it sounding jumbled, because it managed to sound jumbled sometimes.

hmm ill try but i dunno i just do it like i do it it comes off naturally dependin to the lyrics and mood i dunno naah meaaan,anyways thx for feeding

Beat - Nice and serious, I enjoy these types of beats - 9.5/10

Delivery - This is good for the most part, the only thing I notice off is your accent but that's probably just because I'm not use to it - 7/10

Flow - This is good for the most part, there was a few places you fell of though - 8/10

Lyrics - I really enjoyed these, I could tell that it was a deep track from your lyrical content - 9.5/10

Mixing/Quality - This could be upped. Better mixing would make your words more clear and help make your accent sound better. The quality could also be upped which I know isn't the easiest if you have to buy a new mic. Maybe on the mixing side of things, mess around with some new reverb, compressors, EQs, ect.. until it sounds more professional - 7/10

Overall it was a good track, I enjoyed it man, keep it up! - 8.5/10

Do you mind returning the feed? Thanks! - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=145021

thx for the feed man,it was some deep track all by usin the multis cant work without em mayyyne,and yeah man thx quality thing is still an issue ill hope it will be fixed soon mate thx for takin ur time to feed my track and i fed yours thank you man

Damn it bitch, get a better mic!

Haha, I like your flow dude. Very consistent. You've improved heaps, but your quality is still shit. The chorus was really dope, it could have been improved with some panning possibly because it felt a little dry for the hook of the track. We gotta hop on another track when you get a better mic (even though I'm still working with a crap mic :s ). The only problem with this track for me with all things considered is your enunciation, which others have brought up, and it wasn't even that bad. Keep it up man. If you get time, peep this track for me viewtopic.php?f=38&t=144413 . I don't think you've heard how I sound in a while (maybe since Lay to Rest?) so lol this should give a decent picture

yoo muhfuckin solaaace, wudup yeah ill get one soon hopefully, thx for liking my flow and i know about my quality its unfortunate yep,we'll surely do another collab you'll hop on one of my tracks surely maan we gonna kick that shit fo sho ill send u a pm soon

[Le Tunisien]

time for a ... BUMP !

[Eedee]

I'm digging the beat. Good shit.

Lyrics, rhyming wise, were solid. Very solid.
Delivery was ehhh, I'm not used to your accent, but I'm sure I'd get used to it after a few more listens.
Vocal layering was great, didn't sound TOO jumbled, at times it did, like when you were trying to catch a breath and skipped a word or two, I caught that, I think... lol

Anyway, good drop. Keep at it! =]

[da r star]

So I decided to listen to another song of you to get a better idea.

I don't want to beat a dead horse, but like people said, it's all about how hard it is to understand what you are saying from time to time. Someone said that you need to work on your enunciation, but I think the problem lies more in the mixing and recording.

What Mic are you using? Is it possible that you are recording in a place with a lot of echo? Or maybe you put too much reverb on your vocals.

With that said, I don't know if you made the beat, but I like the beats you're rapping on. Lyrics were cool too.

[iain08]

I can't understand dick.