AhdduB - Name Of The Game

[Ticalrecords]

POF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=144184&p=1899471#p1899471

its contains a Lil B diss, so if your in to that you should def take a listen loll


http://soundcloud.com/ahddub/name-of-th ... od-by-vybe

You aint know? - aint shit phase me
Blaze trees – wondering what the hell made me
The cars drugs ladies or just maybe
I’m the only Indian aspiring for the mainstream
Fuck it man – yo I take it in stride
I’m Just a dude looking for a fucking way to get mine
Yezzir that means by any means necessary
Till I got my own fucking flavor at ben and jerry’s/
till I’m fucking a girl with a pussy softer then,
the interior of the S class that I fucking brought her in
please get it twisted – of course its vanity
I’d settle for a strain of weed being named after me
That’s why I’m gonna name my son kush see
The name itself would get him so much pussy
its a real Indian name – imagine that!
Kush Kukkala – yea the world aint having that/

The brand new guy – with a brand new style
Life’s a big joke – what can’t you smile?
Got a brand new girl – and a brand new word
For all the fuckers living in this brand new world
The name of the game – is complete irony
As long as your laughing – we on the same side of things
The name of the game – is complete irony
As long as your laughing – we on the same side of things

raging hormones – at every award show
wear more chains then a death metal bands wardrobe
fuck lyrics – I tap the beat out in Morse code
let these fucking whores know – till I got a sore throat
I wont ever give a fuck – I wont ever give this up
So them pentagrams in ya room girl – yea pin em up
Pray for me please – only free mason I’ve seen yet
Is the jar my friend gave me to keep the weed fresh/
I’m so happy –pretty much so Gatsby
Even if I was on stage having shit thrown at me
Like I’m tryna rap here – was a cashier last year
Now I flash them rings – and the ladies can’t complain
stick ya up like hat hair – that there - is a damn dare
cliché like muslims with shaven heads and black beards
When I stage dive – yes the moment is do or die
crowd screams jump like lil B committing suicide

[TripleNineThree]

Beat - I was really feelin' the beat in the beginning but I feel like when it dropped in it should've been stronger but it was still pretty decent - 7/10

Delivery - Your delivery could be upped but you did have good emotion, I also heard some words that you could pronounce better - 7/10

Lyrics - The lyrics were pretty good, the multis were decent - not to much to say - 7.5/10

Flow - Your flow was alright but I think you could have switched your flow up to flow to this beat a little better when the beat switches up - 7/10

Chorus - This could use some work in my opinion. The lyrics are good in it but it sounds too much like your verses. It doesn't stand out, maybe double or even triple up your vocals on the hook and add some effects so it stands out more from your verses - 5/10

Mixing - Your vocal quality was decent for the most part but I feel like you could definately up you mixing and spend more time on the track. I could hear points where the audio was too loud and the sound of your vocals wasn't consistent. Also, maybe clean up your vocals by experimenting with some different EQs, if you email a snippet of the acapella of this I could show you what I'm talking about. (my email is tripleninethree@gmail.com) Also, I think you could add some overdubs on the end of your lines to make the mixing sound more professional - 5.5/10

Overall - 6.5/10 - This was decent man, keep up the good work!

[Ticalrecords]

hey thanks for the listen bro i really REALLY appreciate it!! and yea the mixing is shit cuz im doing it by myself and i only know a few tricks loll. im still tryna get the hang of protools. if you have any specific suggestions holler for sure cuz i need all the help i can get. thanks again tho



i have another song on here, i'd really like your opinion on it thanks man

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=145172

[TripleNineThree]

Send me the acapella of this verse, I want to mess around with it and if you like how it sounds afterwards I'll teach you how I did it