Mic Abuse Freeverse

[Slim Fiasco]

That looks very promising. I just skimmed through it though, cause I want to read it properly tomorrow morning when I have the time. Expect my feedback.

[Slim Fiasco]

Loved it man. The first thing that I noticed is the choice of vocabulary. I like how the rhymes sounded and flowed together. The transition between lines was great. There were 2 references that I had to google (An Lushan and Great Sheffield Flood), so props for bringing something new to my attention. My favorite line was probably this:

I set it straight like an iron heated at two hundred sixty-five degrees
Or mark you off existence with atomic bombs or an army seize

[Slim Fiasco]

Loved it man. The first thing that I noticed is the choice of vocabulary. I like how the rhymes sounded and flowed together. The transition between lines was great. There were 2 references that I had to google (An Lushan and Great Sheffield Flood), so props for bringing something new to my attention. My favorite line was probably this:

I set it straight like an iron heated at two hundred sixty-five degrees
Or mark you off existence with atomic bombs or an army seize

Once again man, thanks a lot man, I appreciate your reply.

Sure thing man, always!

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Nice piece dude you kept the multis solid through the whole thing, cool rhyming. Had some cool similes and metaphors in there too ! nice dude keep it up, looking forward to the next one

[Eedee]

Haven't really seen you drop anything since I've been active, but this was nice. Rhyming was great, flow was great. Overall I liked it.