Geno - Teeth (Fiasco Day 4)

[Mr.DGAF]

I thought this was gonna be about that movie with the chick that had teeth in her hoo-ha. But oh well haha, this was good. These were my favorite lines:

When I swallow molars is the only way our "crowns" clash,
Here's a brown bag for your sad frown - bounce, hag,

I like the way the second line sounds, with the inverse leading to the rhyme scheme. I think inverses sound the best when only two syllables, just my opinion. But yeah, good stuff.

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

I agree with Mr. DGAF, cool inverse there were probably some more I didnt notice but oh well. I liked this a lot. We dont see too much horror from you so this was cool to see!! the rhyming was awesome throughout the whole thing too man, awesome piece!

[Slim Fiasco]

Great job Geno, your rhyming was excellent yet again, and you did good with the content too.

[Emadyville]

Then I cut you, and your blood spews from your cut wound,
Let it gush through to my cup, do I disgust you?

^ that part stood out, fit well and was awesome. Overall I didnt enjoy it as much as the porno one but it was def a solid piece