One Sixteen [Remix]

[TripleNineThree]

Lyrics are in the video - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Wi3kGg8TUg

LoF - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=145849&p=1924045#p1924045

The first verse is the one that I'm on, drop a link and I'll RTF!

[TripleNineThree]

Bump...

[mdemaz]

Great voice man.

You have a passion for your faith and I respect that...

Well anyway, I love the energy, excellent flow, you managed to stay on-beat for the whole verse.
I really loved the parts where you start chopping and you had some cool ryhmes there.
At 0:37 is the part I really like, you sound flawless there.

Well anyway, keep it up.

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks man I appreciate the feed!!!

[TripleNineThree]

Seems like everybody's tracks are getting slept on lately.. Bump..

[Spyder]

yo

voice is nice, sounds a little muffled. i wouldnt of made out the lyrics if they werent on the screen. but your delivry is good.

flow is pretty good, like the fast stop and go.
see you start the multi on the drum which is fine, but when i do that people say they dont know what im ending on lol its because im new so they have to feel superior i guess

beat i dont really care bout

lyrics are decent nothing really jumped out, and it deff wasnt my subject matter.
but nothing really at flaw.

if u wanna hop on a track i need a collab for the ep. just hit me up

[TripleNineThree]

yo

voice is nice, sounds a little muffled. i wouldnt of made out the lyrics if they werent on the screen. but your delivry is good.

flow is pretty good, like the fast stop and go.
see you start the multi on the drum which is fine, but when i do that people say they dont know what im ending on lol its because im new so they have to feel superior i guess

beat i dont really care bout

lyrics are decent nothing really jumped out, and it deff wasnt my subject matter.
but nothing really at flaw.

if u wanna hop on a track i need a collab for the ep. just hit me up

Thanks for the feedback man!