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Sue you sue me sue woohoo

Postby Gummybur » Jul 5th, '12, 12:56

You couldn't afford a four door cardboard Corolla if you sued Sudafed for killing your kid who wanted to get high for the first time, fuck that, sudafeds, its in the fucking name.

Drop the bullshit society, "Hi Ma'am, how are you" "RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPE", bitch dial the denial hotline they'll file a claim claiming you claimed to claim rape from some guy named dave, they'll deny you that you lieing sack of crap, you want a kit-kat? your pussys so busted up you need a cat-kit to fuckin fix that, get a clue stop trying to sue everyone cause you want some money, fuck you and your currency, currently no one gives a fuck about who you are or what you do, so fuck off, stick your foot in it and motherfuckin' shoe.

This was just generally about people suing everyone. I gave no thought to it, just sort of wrote it up quick. Let me know what you think...haha. :p
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Re: Sue you sue me sue woohoo

Postby Gummybur » Jul 5th, '12, 13:03

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=146445&p=1933990#p1933990 LOF

I always forget about that.
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Re: Sue you sue me sue woohoo

Postby SliK » Jul 5th, '12, 15:30

People structure their verses the way they do for a reason, you should learn how to break your writtens up into bars. Nobody wants to read a paragraph.
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Re: Sue you sue me sue woohoo

Postby Sam. » Jul 5th, '12, 21:40

Ugh, break it up in bars, it's hard to read and understand stuff that you wrote.
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