We Won't Care- Nefarious, Vettori & Sincere

[Vettori]

We recorded this a year ago, and its in the pile of things we hadn't released and thought we'd put it out. Have been working on all new material, But its hard to put some of this stuff to waste.

I'm working on a mixtape, with a much differant vibe to it. Thank you to those that have been patient, Not like anyones waiting on it anyway :P

We Won't Care

http://www.hulkshare.com/w978bc7n7oje

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[Ticalrecords]

wtf no verse from nefarious? cop out man.... nah it was cool i loved the chorus, the verses sounded like they needed to be delivered with a little more aggression but other than that it was pretty legit. good stuff

[TripleNineThree]

Beat - I was definately feeling this beat. It had my head bobbing right away. Did one of you guys make it? I loved it. 9/10

Chorus - This sounded alright. I'm on a laptop so I'm not sure if you panned it out and it sounded better but from the laptop it sounds like it could be cleaned up a little bit. The flow in it definatley sounded good but the mixing could use some work. Actually, after listening a few more times it has me bobbing my head, I liked it - 8.5/10

Verse 1 - The lyrics sounded like they were good. The delivery and flow definatley needs work. The person stayed on beat the entire time which is good. I also think that the verse could have used some better mixing. You could have added some overdubs to it and shadows to make it sound more full and more complex instead of just raw rapping - unless the raw rapping is the effect you were going after. 6/10

Verse 2 - Lyrics were sick. As far as feedback on the rest of the verse, I would say the same as before. Needs better delivery and a smoother flow with more mixing effects on it to make it sound more full - 6/10

Overall, goodjob man! Continue to improve and just make sure you spend more time on not just the rapping aspect of it but the mixing. The mixing ability of the person putting the track together can either make or break a track. 7/10

Hey man do you mind returning the feed? viewtopic.php?f=38&t=146710

[Vettori]

Thank you, again these are older songs, Ive got new ones that im putting together on a tape.
We through this song together about a year ago when we were randomly hanging out at my house, didnt put to much work into it. As of late ive been focusing on writing about real things, these kind of songs are fun to make here & there though Thanks again ofr checking it out

[Vettori]

Bump & No we didnt make the beat. I resort to soundclick a lot, due to the fact i dont have good quality equipment to make beats. I am capable, but i Can't afford a good Piano Atm. I fuck with fruity loops here and there but it's a time consuming process and the instruments on it are shitty quality

thanks for checking this out. again this is incredibly old, I've gotten so much better these days

[Nick. Y]

excluding the chorus, i liked everything else