I'm Good (Remix)

[TripleNineThree]

Verse 1 - Me
Chorus - Lecrae
Verse 2 - Lecrae
Verse 3 - Trip Lee

LoF - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=146780&p=1942642#p1942642

Song - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q-WG6oGtyNI

The lyrics are in the video. Let me know what you think!

Drop a link and I'll return the feed!

EDIT:
This remix is actually for a contest. If you guys could take a minute and go to this link and click the "Like" button above the track, it would help a lot. Thanks! - http://remix.rapzilla.com/imgood/track/63

[Solace]

Rhymes could be improved, long strings of multies would infinitely improve the flow. Not sure what else to say, you should know by now the most part of what I think of your skills audio wise. You know what to do with delivery, your flow is fine, and I do enjoy your subject matter.

One thing I would like to critique about your music is that all you do is rap about God. I mean, that's good and it's your beliefs and though I don't share that belief I'm fine with it, but as an artist I think if you want to be really creative and innovative you can't just focus every song on praising Jesus and talking about the evils of sin...It gets really repetetive and boring. It's like each song is a rehash of another. You know? Step outside of the box.

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks for the feedback man! I hear what you're saying about it sounding repetitive and I'm working on that. I'm trying to make more sounds that don't only praise God, but shares my worldview and how I see certain events in life but through a Christian lens.

For example, the song "Looking In The Mirror" was Christian but I was really explaining things I struggle with but through the eyes of faith. I'm gonna try to make more songs like that, I've received great feed on that track.

I'm also currently writing a song that explains how I form my music, from the prayer in the beginning to the mixing process in the end. I think you'll enjoy the song. I'll probably finish writing it today but I'm a little sick so I'm not sure when I'll record it.

Thanks again man for the good feedback you left on my tracks!

[Solace]

Ah, well it's great to see you know your small flaws and you're working on fixing it up. I will listen to that new song whenever you get to recording it. Feel better.

[Vettori]

The beat sounds cool, I kind of like this has a nice sound to it. The beats not solid enough. i dont know how to explain that better. And the quality on the vocals is good, but i think you should turn up the main vocal 2 more decibals and the adlibs quieter. So first verse was good

I like the Powerful start on verse 2. Didnt hear a bad message, not an inspirational one. I think its a fairly average concept. But performed strong. Very professional song. Grows on you half way through. everything seems to adjust

verse 3 was interesting. I can tell your not rookies. I'll have to keep a constant ear open with you guys. See your diversity.

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks for the feedback man! (I'll unlock your thread now lol)

That's awesome that you thought we were a group. The chorus, second, and third verses were by major dudes. Not sure if you've heard of Lecrae but he just came out with a mixtape with Don Cannon and was on the BET Cypher. Trip Lee is part of Lecrae's lable - you can YouTube either one of them and you'll get a whole bunch of results.

Anyways, it's interesting that you thought my quality somewhat matched theirs, I appreciate it!

[Vettori]

Yea i didnt recognize that , good shit. You kept up with there energy. At the end of the day even if there major artists, Underground artists tend to be better anyway haha, they are more free to do as they please

[Spyder]

basically gotta go with solace man. your good. i like the mixing and your delivery is fine. only thing i can say about that is your still sometimes a little hard to understand. maybe try enunciating more, especially at the end rhymes.
lyrics wise it can step up for technique. and changes your schemes will help you experiment with flows to change those around as well.
other than that i would just like to see a track with different content. it plays a big part in your life but i wanna know more about you through song, or have you just rip a beat is fine.