Geno wrote:Man you seen it all before you're all too familiar with it
There's a penis on the floor and two balls so you know who did it
Red's an inverse.
Holy fuck, never seen someone rhyme whole bars like that.
Geno wrote:Man you seen it all before you're all too familiar with it
There's a penis on the floor and two balls so you know who did it
Red's an inverse.
Amadeo wrote:7 syllable multis all weaved throughout the verse.
Geno wrote:And people think it sucks. ^
Geno wrote:ArsheyHaq wrote:In 'Hello':
"Slipped and fell, hit his back-bone, heard something go crack
Now he's up in the bathroom like he's busting a nap
Almost ended it that soon because of the fact"
I found that pretty obvious because of the way he says it, and plus it's right before the "something go crack / busting a nap / cause of the fact" rhyme.
Geno wrote:ArsheyHaq wrote:In 'Hello':
"Slipped and fell, hit his back-bone, heard something go crack
Now he's up in the bathroom like he's busting a nap
Almost ended it that soon because of the fact"
I found that pretty obvious because of the way he says it, and plus it's right before the "something go crack / busting a nap / cause of the fact" rhyme.
Menzo wrote:The first two don't line up, syllable wise. They're one off...maybe if you added the "a" before "fucked up childhood", that could work.
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