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Quick 15 minute keystyle part 2

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Quick 15 minute keystyle part 2

Postby 4D » May 30th, '06, 11:04

Another quick keystyle spit at ten forty nine
FAt rhymes fuckin you like twelve horny swine
But, fuck pigs, cops get chopped n dumped
Just like chicks, after i`ve got the hump,
Thrown to the side, loike leftover dinner pieces,
I don`t have a feminine side, but, i`ve an inner species
It`s a capital animalistic, dramatical linguistic uber emcee
All opponents panic like faggits when their lubes`re empty
If you`re stupid tempt me, you must be named "Polluted"
Brain rotted to shit, inability to read or write n plain STUPID
Better be prayin to cupid for love, cos i`m gonna dishearten you
I didn`t want to, but, you got excited and forced me to start on you
I`ll startle you, leave you stunned n shocked, rhyme guns cocked
Lyrical magazines loaded and at the ready to launch the pun stock,
I`d unlock the fuck doc and spray but it`s 2 past eleven
And it`s a fifteen minute rhyme, so maybe there`s a heaven
You got lucky, survived a certain inevitable death
It`s eleven o four now, the end to my incredible text!!
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Postby 4D » May 30th, '06, 12:33

Thanks, I`m enjoying doing them. I might try a half hour long one later, see if i can get twice as much done! :D

Nobody would probably read it then though!
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Postby AspirinE » May 30th, '06, 12:34

u should get urself a job as a ghost writer lmao
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Postby 4D » May 30th, '06, 12:46

Lol, thanks for that!! :D

*Makes note of Aspirine`s capitalist idea!* :8)
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