by mdemaz » Aug 26th, '12, 07:16
1. Let's Get It Started (Feat. Mat Demaz & Spyder)
As it has already been said by me, I'm really digging this new style of yours.
You've come a long way since early 2011.
Your delivery and flow has improved dramatically and your lyrics are fantastic.
I felt like you could of exerted more energy, though.
I'm not tooting my own horn, but my verse is epic.
Spyder adds the icing on the cake with his battle rap-style lyricism and punishing vocabulary.
I can tell that he is heavily influenced by many underground acts in the battle scene.
His flow was on point most of the time but it felt slightly delayed on my first listen, but his verse grew on me and I've come to appreciate his old school approach.
2. That's You Talking (Feat. DGAF)
Eedee opens this song with some cool echo effect followed by an energetic and riveting vocal delivery.
This part of the song sounds really good on my sound system.
DGAF has an interesting voice; he sounds like Busta Rhymes.
3. This Is Your Son
Okay, I won't lie, this song sounds really corny.
This isn't your best performance, Eedee, and the mixing is really lazy.
I felt like the beat could of been louder.
4. Broken Code
One would argue that this song is the same old cliche I'm a rapper now so I don't need you speech.
But this is more than that; it reveals your inner suffering and the conclusions you've made in your head about the shit that happened.
I'm left thinking that were annoyed and frustrated with the girl that were were rapping about, but you weren't mad at her.
If she hears this song, I think that she would get offended; it's hard not to piss off women.
5. Never Scared (Feat. Trimss)
Yeah, It's pretty boring.
That's all I can say.
6. Different
This just doesn't work, man.
The beat feels really urban and you are rapping about social issues.
I won't lie, I really like your flow on the first verse.
The hook is interesting.
7. Too Far Gone (Feat. Anna)
I couldn't really get into this track; the vocals sounded really out of place.
Don't think that I haven't noticed the dope lyrics, but the vocals just sound out of place.
You sound like your trying to make us care about your problems, but the beat is just really cheesy and it's coming off as dumb.
I'm just being honest.
8. Bow Down
I really like the beat; you did good on this track actually.
That's all I can say; it's a passable track.
9. Undertow
Holy shit; this is really trippy.
It sounds REALLY fucking chill.
I would of liked it if you put more echo and some reverberation in your vocals.
10. Wishing On A Memory
I like the beat, but I'm just not feeling your performance.
You sound really out of place.
The beat is too quiet.
11. Aspirations
I really wanted to love this track, but I just couldn't.
The beat is really boring and the vocals sound out of place again.
12. The Throne
Alright, this is more like it.
I loved your delivery on this track.
Again, another passable song.
13. My Own Revolution
Boring.
14. Smokey Memories
This is one of my favorite tracks; I love your energy and lyrics.
You pretty much destroyed everyone, haha.
15. RATs Radio Freestyle (Live) (Bonus Track)
I really love this track as well; you had some riveting lyrics.
I found it interesting that you went on a radio show.
Overall:
This is your best work to date, but you still have a long way to go.
Just keep practicing and don't give up.
I'm out.
Last edited by
mdemaz on Aug 27th, '12, 00:28, edited 2 times in total.
so to remind me later: