'They call me a wigger like Renee Zell'
Renee Zellweger 'Weger'
Jaaaaaaaaaackx wrote:'They call me a ***** like Renee Zell'
Renee Zellweger 'Weger'
Kill You wrote:Em gives all those faggot fans what they want, an emotional (good) verse, and yet people still find a way to bitch? I give up.:
Menzo wrote:There's no random rhyming, I don't know what anyone is talking about.
Almostlity wrote:Grow up faggots
EminemInsider wrote:Jesus Christ, HOW FUCKING STUPID ARE YOU PEOPLE?!?!?!?!?!
Geno wrote:I don't wanna have a kid with Zabe tbh.
Blu wrote:Menzo wrote:There's no random rhyming, I don't know what anyone is talking about.
Em's verse is scattered all over the place. He's talking about 5 mics first, then Taz spazzing on ho-bags, then how you shouldn't admit when someone's better than you, then going back to a regular job and holding your gonads, then how people call him a ***** like Rene Zell and how he raises hell like a stay at home dad.
Almostlity wrote:Grow up faggots
EminemInsider wrote:Jesus Christ, HOW FUCKING STUPID ARE YOU PEOPLE?!?!?!?!?!
Blu wrote:"His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already: mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready
To drop bombs, but he keeps on forgetting
What he wrote down, the whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth but the words won't come out
He's choking, how? Everybody's joking now
The clock's run out, time's up, over - blaow!"
That actually all makes sense, whereas on "Our House" Em is just picking random topics up:
"Looking back on, my career even, hindsights, tunnel vision, 5 mics
Never wanted that so bad well I got-ta go mad
Nomad with a notepad
Go Taz, spaz on these ho bags
That bother me, but I never wanna show that
Just don't act like it ever does
Even though you know that there will never come"
Like, what does that all mean?? It's not a linear, coherent thought like Em would usually pull off.
Accor wrote:Kill You wrote:Em gives all those faggot fans what they want, an emotional (good) verse, and yet people still find a way to bitch? I give up.:
Actually I'm pretty sure all people want is a well executed verse, it doesn't necessarily have to be emotional but it HAS to be well executed, no matter what the content is. Yeah people wanted something serious for a change (which shouldn't even need to be requested) but it being serious doesn't automatically make it good. It still had BAD lines. Raise havoc like a stay at home dad is a bad line. That Renee ZellWEGGER line doesn't even work. The random stringing of rhymes about hoebags and gonads is a clear sign of bad writing. We aren't trying to find ways to bitch, he just keeps piling us with ammo.
Oh and he REALLY over complicated his flow/delivery which didn't fit the song at all.
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