Toast To The West Coast (Just a first draft)

[RainMan44]

I am on the chorus and the SECOND VERSE. The first and last verse is a homie I met playin' ball, and I found out he had a studio. We're going to fix the mix up, AND the chorus falls off beat a couple times...I'm going to REDO the whole chorus in a different tone, add adlibs, stacks, doubles, etc. SOOOOO much work to be done..


I think the only flawless part of MINE, is the first 4 bars of my verse. Btw YES i was trying to sound like Dre with "the Westcoast is back, roll the grass" aha

LOF viewtopic.php?f=38&t=148226&p=1989895#p1989895

http://soundcloud.com/austinbrown415/toast-to-the-west-coast



(I def shouldn't have hit those 4 bowls out of a bong before I recorded...first time really hitting from a bong (been smoking for 4 years) but didn't know that...that shit fucking SMASHES you) lol

[Blu]

Wow, this is chill as hell. I can tell you were off beat a lil when you said "the West Coast is back", but otherwise it's great.

Real nice chill out track. Good work man.

[RainMan44]

Thank you bro, appreciate that. It's going to be even better after it's redone.

Btw, I think that the guy who mixed it just placed it oddly on the track...because, is it just me, or does the chorus start falling offbeat the 2nd time when it repeats? First sounds fine then second repeat is off.

[Mr.DGAF]

I'll feed tomorrow but it's cool to see ya in the AS man. Good shit.

[PAINKILLƎR]

I'm feeling this, great track. At first I didn't notice the chorus falling off bit but after the second I kinda see what you mean, nonetheless great track. Makes me proud to rep the West Coast.

[RainMan44]

Thank you
I appreciate that.

And DGAF, I was about to message you telling you that I finally got studio access, so we can get that done hopefully if he lets me lay a verse real quick.

[Eedee]

Thank you
I appreciate that.

And DGAF, I was about to message you telling you that I finally got studio access, so we can get that done hopefully if he lets me lay a verse real quick.

I'll be mixing that shit, BTW. I did DGAF's verse on that track you're talking about.

Anyway, onto the track.

I didn't like the first dude. Too many street languages and "manes" haha.
I wasn't expecting your voice to be like this, tbh. WAY deep and awesome. That was freakin' cool to hear haha.

[Mr.DGAF]

Good to hear dude, if he does hit me up with what you got and we can mix it and ish. Then that third verse haha, that'll be crazy. But yeah.

If you wouldn't mind feeding my track haha...

Or not

On to the feed. This was dope. Loved the beat, and your voice sounds chill as fuck. You slipped on the beat in the middle of your verse but picked right back up. This was really damn good. I was surprised.

[RainMan44]

Thanks guys, and everyone compliments my voice but for some reason I hate it LOL

Btw, Eedee, I think his first verse was much weaker than his 2nd, his second is pretty cool...especially since everything he's saying in it is true, he's actually my weed dealer


Can't wait for this shit, and Mr.DGAF I will feed it asap.

[RainMan44]

bumppppPPP

[Eedee]

bumppppPPP

Feed will get you feed.

[RainMan44]

bumppppPPP

Feed will get you feed.

Barely any new songs up though.

[Eedee]

bumppppPPP

Feed will get you feed.

Barely any new songs up though.

Mine...?

[Le Tunisien]

hmmmmm i liked this song ,it has such a chilling feel...a snoop dogg style of song i could tell .. hmm i loved it even though the hook wasnt that good..it kinda fell off beat i dunno i didnt feel it...other than that i like the delivery and your voice , good job )