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after i die

Postby X-Ray » Jun 6th, '06, 21:12

when I die im gonna be so high
that i dont realise im not alive
and just walk-on and make ma own songs
wether I exist or not ill leave my body to rot
get in a strot ,coz ppl dont know what
is mooving the quill
but still, i wont give up wether im real
or not ill still have my apel
and be able to chil and to kill
find bush,, and hit him to mush
get in a rush and run away
sudenlay I will realise,, i aint alive
I can kill what ever side
i had and extend my conshens
to sothing much more wide
get into a porn manshen and watch the bitches ride
thos sybians and thos lesbians
whatch the hump each other like beans
in a pan and when I finaly did that
ill find ma name on gods pad
get up and go to heaven and have-him
givin me the number one spot to wach
how bush is getting shot
from above and i see it with so much love
finaly some 1 who does get this shit
without me having to shove the pricks
what I meaan with it finaly peace for a bit

beat and voice ect from we as amercans

ps. feedback ples ;)
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Postby X-Ray » Jun 6th, '06, 21:47

shouldent i just make the rhymes fat thea makes it eeasiert to be fab
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Postby X-Ray » Jun 6th, '06, 22:17

better now???
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