My 1st beat

[Whitefox]

This is my first attempt to create a beat in FL Studio 9. Well, check it.

http://www.hulkshare.com/186tgu2i3xbc

[Blu]

Damn I swear, everyone on this forum loves those sad guitar/piano intros on a beat. It just sounds soo annoying to me.

[Whitefox]

But i have no pianos . and sad guitar is through the whole song, it is the main melody/ and you didnt like it

[cityfan31]

Hey, which guitar sound did you use on FL? I like the main riff, it sounds quite haunting. Also like the drums. The pipe or whatever it is that comes in could I think be on some better notes, sometimes it sounds out of key. Also, the crackles in the background, what sound are they cos they remind me of Lose Yourself. This could be really nice with a few tweaks I think.

[Whitefox]

I used MusicLab Real Guitar.And crackles are from Native Instruments Whistler Library.