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Desperadoes - Apocalypse

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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 30th, '13, 08:45

Wanna know why I'm locked up with psycho sick people?
Because once I had a neighbor and I fucking ate her dog
Biggest mistake of my life I cooked it, dog taste better raw (truuu)
The bitch shoulda known that I was Michael Vick lethal
Not only that but I dug up my childhood friend Fred Hardy
Took him home to talk and play with his dead body
Till it was infested with fucking maggots, so fuck it
I threw the body in some random backyard in a bucket
With a note that read "Suck it faggots" nicely tuck in
Out came the mom about to yack hard "Sorry Ms. Puckett!"


Can it with the burned fucking hate faggot, I love you
Dammit, If it weren't for my straight jacket I'd hug you

This is my second verse(incomplete) from the sanatorium someone highligh only the multi-syllable rhymes in here please...
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby Eedee » Jan 30th, '13, 08:50

PAINKILLƎR wrote:Wanna know why I'm locked up with psycho sick people?
Because once I had a neighbor and I fucking ate her dog
Biggest mistake of my life I cooked it, dog taste better raw (truuu)
The bitch shoulda known that I was Michael Vick lethal
Not only that but I dug up my childhood friend Fred Hardy
Took him home to talk and play with his dead body
Till it was infested with fucking maggots, so fuck it
I threw the body in some random backyard in a bucket
With a note that read "Suck it faggots" nicely tuck in
Out came the mom about to yack hard "Sorry Ms. Puckett!"


Can it with the burned fucking hate faggot, I love you
Dammit, If it weren't for my straight jacket I'd hug you

This is my second verse(incomplete) from the sanatorium someone highligh only the multi-syllable rhymes in here please...


Just what I caught upon first glance.
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 30th, '13, 08:51

There's a gagillion more, 2complex4u :crossed:
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby Eedee » Jan 30th, '13, 08:52

PAINKILLƎR wrote:There's a gagillion more, 2complex4u :crossed:


Show me then, yo. :shifty:
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 30th, '13, 08:57

PAINKILLƎR wrote:Wanna know why I'm locked up with psycho sick people?
Because once I had a neighbor and I fucking ate her dog
Biggest mistake of my life I cooked it, dog taste better raw (truuu)
The bitch shoulda known that I was Michael Vick lethal
Not only that but I dug up my childhood friend Fred Hardy
Took him home to talk and play with his dead body
Till it was infested with fucking maggots, so fuck it
I threw the body in some random backyard in a bucket
With a note that read "Suck it faggots" nicely tuck in
Out came the mom about to yack hard "Sorry Ms. Puckett!"


Can it with the burned fucking hate faggot, I love you
Dammit, If it weren't for my straight jacket I'd hug you

This is my second verse(incomplete) from the sanatorium someone highligh only the multi-syllable rhymes in here please...

I ran out of colors but there are more...
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby Eedee » Jan 30th, '13, 08:58

I saw that ate her dog/better raw thing but I didn't think it rhymed that well.

Didn't see the others though. Nice.

Try highlighting my verse for that song we're working on lol
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby Eedee » Jan 30th, '13, 09:00

InsaneTRex94 wrote:Fuck it when we drop I'm gonna get you guys to highlight my shit to make me feel better about myself. I'm trying to cram whatever the fuck I can in there.

THATS WHAT HE SAID.


GOD DAMN TREX GOING IN.
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 30th, '13, 09:02

Eedee wrote:I saw that ate her dog/better raw thing but I didn't think it rhymed that well.

Must be an Alaska thing :shifty: because it rhymes well to me
Eedee wrote:Didn't see the others though. Nice.

Just because you think less of me doesn't mean you gotta ignore what you see
Eedee wrote:Try highlighting my verse for that song we're working on lol

I'll run out of colors quick...
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby Eedee » Jan 30th, '13, 09:03

^ Dat's my homeboy.
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 30th, '13, 09:05

QUICK SOMEONE SUCK MY DICK I FEEL LEFT OUT
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 30th, '13, 09:07

You know it :8)

It's late in L.A. idk about Alaska or Canada and where ever TRex lives but it's late, I'm going to sleep, night ya'll
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby Eedee » Jan 30th, '13, 09:07

^ Good night brah.

Sleep well.
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 30th, '13, 09:10

:flutter: what a guy, sleep well too. Sweet wet dreams with some honeys to you all

Oh shit T is from NJ? no wonder why you wanna off yourself :shifty: Prepare your anus T because I'm heading over there and I'm fucking you with a spiked bat
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby Eedee » Jan 30th, '13, 09:11

Alaska is where it's at.

Kidding. There's no sun. Natural depression. I wanna kill myself.
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 30th, '13, 09:13

Eedee wrote:Alaska is where it's at.

Kidding. There's no sun. Natural depression. I wanna kill myself.

I wanna kill myself because I've never seen snow...
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