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BankJob

Postby Just Silver » Feb 19th, '13, 00:25

feed - JR Random 16 *please copy n paste

Shown up in the sedan, tryin to leave in the van
When the gang comes back with a better plan
They say "Man how about a bank ,split the profit"
Its just a hit and lick n, plus i gotta hostage,
fuck it you got it, duckin and dodgin from cops and swat
Members in the entrance tryin to get what we got
Remember we got plans , and shitloads of plots
Stockpile the ammo and its buzzing like wasps
Hogtied hostage cop tries and bust us?
Itll take a little bit more than a quick shot
Perfect aim hip spot coming clip drops
Hits the marble floor,slides next to the larger door
Energy in war, adreneline rush , im defending my luck
Especially since were still here
Got the guards that think theyre hard sweatin like chilled beer
So who do i kill here,Before i take a suitcase and trip on my shoelace
Then itd be too late, so ill take it and shakem over to the gate with em
So much at stake sentences, presidents ,and forgiveness chips
So damn were really in this bitch in the safe taking plates
At least four cops got stunned from taze and mace
None of us four got caught on this given day
Left sinning to pray and living for pay

FUCK THE POLICE
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Re: BankJob

Postby Just Silver » Feb 19th, '13, 01:06

bigray wrote:Ur on a rampage....every time I come here..u have something new. :y:

The flow was great and easy for me and I really enjoyed the content....keep writing B :smoking:

thanks for the feed :smoking:
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Re: BankJob

Postby Just Silver » Feb 20th, '13, 02:27

first and last bump
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Re: BankJob

Postby TonyTilt » Feb 20th, '13, 03:25

Just Silver wrote:feed - JR Random 16 *please copy n paste

Shown up in the sedan, tryin to leave in the van
When the gang comes back with a better plan
They say "Man how about a bank ,split the profit"
Its just a hit and lick n, plus i gotta hostage,
fuck it you got it, duckin and dodgin from cops and swat
Members in the entrance tryin to get what we got
Remember we got plans , and shitloads of plots
Stockpile the ammo and its buzzing like wasps
Hogtied hostage cop tries and bust us?
Itll take a little bit more than a quick shot
Perfect aim hip spot coming clip drops
Hits the marble floor,slides next to the larger door (love this)
Energy in war, adreneline rush , im defending my luck
Especially since were still here
Got the guards that think theyre hard sweatin like chilled beer
So who do i kill here,Before i take a suitcase and trip on my shoelace
Then itd be too late, so ill take it and shakem over to the gate with em
So much at stake sentences, presidents ,and forgiveness chips
So damn were really in this bitch in the safe taking plates
At least four cops got stunned from taze and mace
None of us four got caught on this given day
Left sinning to pray and living for pay

FUCK THE POLICE

Dude... That was sick as hell! immediately when I started reading the beat from "murder murder" came into my head and it fit perfectly. Great flow and great rhyming.
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Re: BankJob

Postby Just Silver » Feb 20th, '13, 04:08

Thanks guy im droppin at least Something a day from now on lol
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Re: BankJob

Postby TonyTilt » Feb 21st, '13, 05:18

You should really consider putting this over the murder murder beat
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Re: BankJob

Postby Just Silver » Feb 21st, '13, 13:16

TonyTilt wrote:You should really consider putting this over the murder murder beat

it does sorta go with it lol :smoking: lol

but wasnt intentional
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Re: BankJob

Postby TonyTilt » Feb 21st, '13, 18:52

Hahah it just came into my head immediately
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