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AhdduB - L4T Intro (w the Volume fixed)

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AhdduB - L4T Intro (w the Volume fixed)

Postby Ticalrecords » Feb 17th, '13, 16:00

POF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=153842


I posted this song a while back but i decided to re do it and try really getting it down pact. tell me what ya think!

http://soundcloud.com/ahddub/westside-story-remix


aite i doubled the volume, so now i know yall can hear it loll.

am i really that hard to understand? like accent/enunciation wise? please point out exactly where i get mush mouthed cuz i aint tryna be the suburban Gucci Mane, nah mean?

heres the lyrics:

Westside story
Stoners posers loners screw ups
Nerds Fat fucks pessimists and losers
Closet freaks known sluts – celibates and virgins
All these misfits been waiting for the verdict

Ever since they blamed the south for ruining rap
No one applauds – how ya still get them booties to clap
I don’t know but it got real when you and ya friends
Watched yo aunt snap her fingers and doing the dance
I got callouses on my finger tips from too many snaps
Yall got carpel – find it hard using the pen?
I bet ya do – what can ya do – but find another beat to dance to
Haha talk about planning ya next move! OHH/
I’m guessing all the time I spent writing these lyrics
Yo conceited bitch ass spent in front of the mirror
But hey – that’s okay – vanity is not a sin
At least not in my book – or when you have my looks
(word?) all in unison with the eye roll
I figure a sneer will do when a smile won’t
Oh wait wait – hold up this just in
All the sluts on campus have put in their two cents/
apparently Hubris and the synonymous
is not as loveable as I once thought it was
neither are big words – yea so remember
biggest syllable word you can use is – whatever
I have a disease – I have too many emotions
That’s why I use bars to numb all of that bullshit
I prolly aint ill - who would call this rap?
I guess I put the hype in hypochondriac/
Ah ha ah ha – did ya hear that?
Only candle you could hold to me is from the earwax
And I’ll take care of that – with a wet willy
I’m just a kid – Like shady still calling himself Billy*
Fuck it I guess I watched one too many interviews
MMLP is all I ever listen to
Life’s a thriller – watched by average joes as my dad is
kept it one hundred – like the change in five jacksons/
Haha who’s the only one on the bill?
But when it all falls down – its on foreal
In rap its about as Common as getting top billing
even after advocating and supporting cop killing
hahaha to have Bill o reilly tell it right?
Fuck it girl– I’ll gladly take an L this time
Just wait – its all over when I get my money up
Twenty twelve bitch – take it like a motherfucking slut

* thats why I included that interview snippet at the end :D
Last edited by Ticalrecords on Feb 18th, '13, 22:47, edited 4 times in total.
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Re: AhdduB - L4T Intro

Postby yung rom » Feb 18th, '13, 00:56

this was really good! the rapping really fit the beat. but i had a lot of trouble understanding what you were saying, turn them up. a lot. i would also recommend posting the lyrics (in this post). liked the eminem quote at the end haha.
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Re: AhdduB - L4T Intro

Postby Ticalrecords » Feb 18th, '13, 01:01

aite can yall come back and check this out in five minutes? i'll have the version updated
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Re: AhdduB - L4T Intro

Postby Ticalrecords » Feb 18th, '13, 01:05

i just changed the mofo right quick, please take one more listen - to help me improve nah mean
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Re: AhdduB - L4T Intro

Postby Ticalrecords » Feb 18th, '13, 01:17

loll aite i will increase that volume by more than a few decibals. give me ten more seconds loll.
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Re: AhdduB - L4T Intro

Postby Ticalrecords » Feb 18th, '13, 01:37

aite i fixed that shit
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Re: AhdduB - L4T Intro

Postby yung rom » Feb 18th, '13, 01:56

it was a little better but i would say make it even louder
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Re: AhdduB - L4T Intro

Postby Ticalrecords » Feb 18th, '13, 01:59

EminemStanatic wrote:it was a little better but i would say make it even louder



lollll damn i literally doubled the volume. oh well ill try
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Re: AhdduB - L4T Intro (w the Volume fixed)

Postby Ticalrecords » Feb 18th, '13, 22:48

come on guys i fixed the volume issue, please tell me how I need to improve, becuase I want to hand this out at my college, so its gotta be legit yk what im saying? anyways, bump
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Re: AhdduB - L4T Intro (w the Volume fixed)

Postby Ticalrecords » Feb 28th, '13, 18:21

damnit guys, come on bump like a mofo
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Re: AhdduB - L4T Intro (w the Volume fixed)

Postby Nefarious » Feb 28th, '13, 19:12

It was pretty damn good, id say one of the best ive heard from you at some points lyrically, some of ur lines seemed to me like the best lines ive seen you write, but how would i know what ur best is, i havent really heard everything youve done, but from what ive heard from you, this one was definately a good listen, like usual i dont have anything bad to say about it, good job.
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Re: AhdduB - L4T Intro (w the Volume fixed)

Postby Ticalrecords » Feb 28th, '13, 23:38

thanks broski appreciate the listen. btw when you gon drop another song?
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