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Was Em's CMLR verse a step in the right direction?

Postby Evil Twin » Mar 21st, '13, 21:25

Basically, would enjoy listening to that style on his next album?

His verse on this song was quite brilliant. Shame it was short.

His flow was great, lyricism is perfect as always, he had some great punchlines and not to mention his flow and voice sounded a lot more natural. After I heard this song, especially his voice, I could tell his new album is going to be a classic.

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Re: Was Em's CMLR verse a step in the right direction?

Postby Hansen » Mar 21st, '13, 21:36

I liked his verse alot. Sounds like he's in a good place/happy and definately ready to release a good album.
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Re: Was Em's CMLR verse a step in the right direction?

Postby HeySamantha » Mar 21st, '13, 21:41

I think it sounded great, the song itself isn't great because the entire thing is one massive pun. I think he sounded good and did a decent verse on a dumb song lol
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Re: Was Em's CMLR verse a step in the right direction?

Postby Trimss » Mar 21st, '13, 21:44

I liked Here Comes The Week End more, but yeah. It was a cool verse.
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Re: Was Em's CMLR verse a step in the right direction?

Postby Blu » Mar 21st, '13, 23:17

I fail to see how his CLMR verse was "brilliant".

You're basing how good his next album will be based off an average verse? What is wrong with you people...
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Re: Was Em's CMLR verse a step in the right direction?

Postby Blu » Mar 21st, '13, 23:21

Shady's Apocalypse wrote:His verse on this song was quite brilliant. Shame it was short.
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Re: Was Em's CMLR verse a step in the right direction?

Postby Blu » Mar 21st, '13, 23:23

Yeah, I like the laid-back presence Eminem decided to bring on the track, but to say it's a great verse because of that laid-back presence is insane.
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Re: Was Em's CMLR verse a step in the right direction?

Postby Kill You » Mar 21st, '13, 23:36

It is a good verse though, wtf. Where's the shitty and embarrassing punchlines? Where's the yelling? Where's his awkward stop-go flow at? Oh yeah, nowhere. His verse was great, fuck anyone who doesn't agree. CMLR is the Eminem everyone wanted to hear come back. His flow is great, his voice is great, rhyming is great, and content is spot on perfect. There is nothing wrong with this verse.

A better question is what's bad about it? What makes it NOT a good verse for those who believe it isn't...it's his best verse of 2012 that we heard. Actually, the question is mainly for Blu since he's the one that's basically saying it's average when it is most certainly ABOVE average. So please, Blu, enlighten me on how this is an average verse. Point out the bad lines, if you can. It's not an amazing verse by any means but it IS good and IS a step in the right direction after hearing Throw It Up (which isn't that bad to begin with either smh)
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Re: Was Em's CMLR verse a step in the right direction?

Postby Blu » Mar 21st, '13, 23:50

First off, the song's concept is pretty corny itself. Bicycles for metaphors of sex? Skylar poking fun at celebrities that only talk about sex? Eh, topic's played out.

Onto Eminem's verse. I said it was average because he doesn't really have any bad punches or lines...they're just all so corny. But, that's thanks to the terrible song concept.

"Bagging up chicks like a bag of chips
With a bag of prophylactics as big as Mick Jagger lips" - Corny

"Got this bitch gagging, they call me the broad killer
I'm the cousin of Godzilla, cause I spit fire and my dick is draggin'" - Corny and he stole this from Chamillionaire

I don't think anyone was hoping Eminem would come out with a verse like this. This is not a step in the right direction.

He does the stop-and-go flow right at the beginning btw: "She's DIS-TRACTED"

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Re: Was Em's CMLR verse a step in the right direction?

Postby SoldierShady » Mar 22nd, '13, 00:26

"If I had..." verses are laid back as hell and quite brilliant. CLMR verse is laid back and ok. Borderline sub-par.
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Re: Was Em's CMLR verse a step in the right direction?

Postby Atone » Mar 22nd, '13, 01:45

what is CMLR? how about you dumbasses stop abbreviating everything and actually type the shit out, lazy fucks

nah just playin, song was cool
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Re: Was Em's CMLR verse a step in the right direction?

Postby sbolli1 » Mar 22nd, '13, 04:18

Kill You wrote:It is a good verse though, wtf. Where's the shitty and embarrassing punchlines? Where's the yelling? Where's his awkward stop-go flow at? Oh yeah, nowhere. His verse was great, fuck anyone who doesn't agree. CMLR is the Eminem everyone wanted to hear come back. His flow is great, his voice is great, rhyming is great, and content is spot on perfect. There is nothing wrong with this verse.

A better question is what's bad about it? What makes it NOT a good verse for those who believe it isn't...it's his best verse of 2012 that we heard. Actually, the question is mainly for Blu since he's the one that's basically saying it's average when it is most certainly ABOVE average. So please, Blu, enlighten me on how this is an average verse. Point out the bad lines, if you can. It's not an amazing verse by any means but it IS good and IS a step in the right direction after hearing Throw It Up (which isn't that bad to begin with either smh)


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Re: Was Em's CMLR verse a step in the right direction?

Postby ShadyxEminem » Mar 22nd, '13, 20:22

MY WHEELS SPOKE TO HER! That line was funny, and stood out :laughing:
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Re: Was Em's CMLR verse a step in the right direction?

Postby babyjane » Mar 22nd, '13, 20:30

I feel the same way about his verse on this song as I do about Here Comes The Weekend. His voice and flow were good but the punchlines are becoming tiresome. It's the same thing on every feature, some corny punchline like look at how clever I am 'Bicycle.....spoke'. The problem is it's just 30 seconds on bad songs. That's not time enough to talk about anything interesting and he doesn't sound very inspired. Hopefully this just means he's saving up the good lyrical content for his album. I wonder if he has anything interesting to talk about. He doesn't seem to get out much.
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Re: Was Em's CMLR verse a step in the right direction?

Postby SG. » Mar 22nd, '13, 22:29

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