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writers block and odd rhyme scheme/flow

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writers block and odd rhyme scheme/flow

Postby Just Silver » Jul 5th, '13, 15:13

so yea im working on my new piece sober as a gopher :'(

and i started writing and it still has a hidden message but less pizazz

the lines are short and 13 line verses :confusion:

chorus is ok by my standards lol

my question is whats a good way to get inspiration and work with very short bars
any suggestions are appreciated short bars are strange :sweating:
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Re: writers block and odd rhyme scheme/flow

Postby Kill You » Jul 5th, '13, 15:18

When I write, I tend to write about things I see around me. Like throw a reference in. A Hulk commercial was on TV and I used a Hulk line lol. It's actually good to do what Mac Miller did, write to movies and shit with the sound off.
"I guess this shit took an unexpected twist like the neck of the fricken Exorcist!"

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Re: writers block and odd rhyme scheme/flow

Postby Just Silver » Jul 5th, '13, 15:22

thanks guy lol hopefully this piece will work with such short bars
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