Bigray - Check Mate

[Mr.DGAF]

Nice shit ray! This actually is impressive lyrically dude. Like some solid ass rhymes in here dude. Diss as a whole isn't very hard hitting, some generic stuff but overall this was a well written drop dude.

[Snakebeast]

Like DGAF said, very impressive rhyme wise. It flows very well too:

Act like you hard you ain’t macho a bit
King of the ring I’m on top of my shit

Great shit. Not much of a diss tho (i.e. you didn't really insult SliK that much, you mostly just hyped yourself up, which is still great).


ps. I think this track might fit with the Nail in the Coffin instrumental.

[Francesco]

Nice lines all over the place... it is not just a random drop too as it is way longer than just a verse. Nice overall!

[Sam.]

It wasn't that dope because you just elongated it. It wasn't needed. Short and simple could have done the work. But, it's your choice at the end of the day.

[Sam.]

"It wasn't THAT dope"

"It wasn't dope"

Difference?

I used 'dope' instead of 'hard hitting' because others used the same words. The length was a factor. You made it a tad bit longer filled with SOME weak lines. Had you not used those? It'd have a little more effective. You didn't know that. How would you unless someone like me told you? Lmao! Peace.