FIRST MUSIC VIDEO!

[TripleNineThree]

Hey guys, this is my very first music video! I did this for my song "Broken Dream" which is a single off of my upcoming album "9/9/93"

Let me know what you guys think!!!

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Video (Watch it in HD) - http://youtu.be/-Y2hSFPyTMc

[Eedee]

You already know what I think about the song (I absolutely love it)!

The video was awesome-looking, dude. Great quality and direction. Nice lighting, etc. I like the blurs and transitions, like when you help up the three fingers, little blur, next shot, holding up the three fingers in a different shot. It's stuff like that that's cool.

Only think to knock is your hand movements at times haha. Especially near the end, it was kinda awkward with the bright lights behind you and you felt like you didn't know what to do with your hands. But it won't end our friendship, I don't think.

[TripleNineThree]

Hahah! I agree. I did not know what to do with my hands. It's awkward being on a stage, rapping to one person with a camera........... I will be sure to work on that next time but thanks for the feedback man!

[TripleNineThree]

It's also really awkward for me to rap without holding a microphone lol

[Eedee]

It's all good haha

I'm recording my music video next week :3

[Vettori]

Dude your chorus is incredible..voice is smooth, Theres a great difference between your chorus and verse.. Keep doing what your doing Hook wise. Your verse energy needs to step up though.
I love the positive route. This has a lot of replay value..Good job

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks man! I actually did not do the chorus -because that is Sean Divine

[Vettori]

ahh :P of coarse. Regardless you did well.. Try to step it up a little more :P

[Him Shadow]

yo I really like that song, actually everything about it, the hook is nice too, man

about the music video, it's not that good, someone fucked the montage imo
I like that scene after the second hook though, I think the video material had the potential but montage ruind it.

[MistaVijilantee]

You already know what I think about the song (I absolutely love it)!

The video was awesome-looking, dude. Great quality and direction. Nice lighting, etc. I like the blurs and transitions, like when you help up the three fingers, little blur, next shot, holding up the three fingers in a different shot. It's stuff like that that's cool.

Only think to knock is your hand movements at times haha. Especially near the end, it was kinda awkward with the bright lights behind you and you felt like you didn't know what to do with your hands. But it won't end our friendship, I don't think.

Pretty much this.
Well shot, well executed.
But to reiterate you didn't look that natural, so to speak.

[mdemaz]

Not bad.

I liked the filters and the camera quality was ok.
I felt the sky could of had more detail and such.

Although the quality looks really good in some parts, like in front of that fog machine.

Nicely done, though.

What camera did you guys use?
Was it a DSLR?

The parts at the end were cool.

[VintageSlimBish]

Work on your voice, it cracks, shifts pitch, a little strained, and whiney.
And get better at going with the beat.

The good: you're good add editing, and lyrics are alright.

[Eedee]

Work on your voice, it cracks, shifts pitch, a little strained, and whiney.
And get better at going with the beat.

The good: you're good add editing, and lyrics are alright.

Now you're a confirmed troll.

[VintageSlimBish]

Work on your voice, it cracks, shifts pitch, a little strained, and whiney.
And get better at going with the beat.

The good: you're good add editing, and lyrics are alright.

Now you're a confirmed troll.

And I'm the one who posts off topic..

[Eedee]

It's not off topic. Nice try, though.

Triple's flow on this song is basically flawless. He rode the beat perfectly. And his voice was great, one of his best voices he's ever done. And I don't even like the guy. He's a total nut.

You're just trolling now.