by Drax207 » Sep 8th, '13, 18:49
You should have posted this on Shady Reviews man !
Anyway, I like Em's verse, he was probably learning how to rap again when he recorded it and it was not that bad. The rhyme scheme is great tbh.
Ooh wow, look at the bitches up in this club
Man im gettin me some digits fo I leave up out this mug
And it's like boom pow, wam, bam, thank you ma'am
I ain't kissin you on the lips, but ill be glad to shake your hand
Now lets get blew out, lets start some shit tonight
Just let me pick the chick that I'mma leave here with tonight
Before we get the fighting, and threw out
This music makes me rowdy, how they gonna play that new trick trick
And expect no-one to get their shit split
It's just too wild, and one more shot of hypnotic
And I am not in control of my body, I go robotic and blow a fuse out
Homies is like you're startin to stagger
And I'm nah that's just my swagger but I'm dancing with this fat girl
And gettin loose now, I don't wanna fight, I feel like partying
Til' this idiot dumps his bacardi on my cardigan and knocks my screws out
It never fails, I'm know I'm going to jail
I might as well take the laces out my shoes now
You can clearly hear this rhyme the whole verse. Not bad Em, not bad. Kinda reminds me his "40 Oz" verse with the "throat" rhyme. But yeah, it's basically nothing but a party song, so what he's saying is absolutely not original.
My Music Box, #1 Em song <Insert Insult Here> #SlumericanMr. Porter wrote:csw621 wrote:Mr. Porter wrote:I also thought he sounded off-beat.
Porter plz, don't you have a youtube awards performance to fuck up
As a matter of fact I do. Thanks for reminding me.