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Re: Best Multis

Postby ronnie56 » Nov 12th, '13, 01:31

EminemInsider wrote:Probably my favorite multis from MMLP 2:

I'm trying to be lowkey, hopefully nobody notices me
In produce, hunched over, giant nosebleed
Ogre style as I mosey over to the frozen aisle
By the frozen yogurt this guy approached me
Embarrassed, I just did Comerica with Hova
Show's over, I'm hiding in Kroger buying groceries
He just had front row seats, told me to sign this poster
Then insults me "wow, up close didn't know you had crow's feet"

It's just so intricate and woven together.

I especially like how "sign this poster" can work with "buying grocer," although he had to pick whether to pronounce it as 2 or 3 syllables to choose whether it would go with that or the "giant nosebleed" scheme.

Plenty of inverse stuff and hidden stuff in there, too. giant nose and guy approached/frozen ai(sle). over gi(ant)/frozen ai(sle).



Wasn't ready to be no millionaire, I was ill-prepared
I was prepared to be ill though, the skill was there
From the beginning, it wasn't bout the ends
It was bout busting raps and standing for something, fuck an acronym
Cut the fucking act like you're happy, I'm fucking back again
With another anthem, why stop when it doesn't have to end
It ain't over 'til I say it's over – enough when I say enough
Throw me to them wolves and close the gate up
I'm afraid of what'll happen to them wolves
When the thought of being thrown into an alligator pit, I salivate at it
Wait is up, hands up like it's 12 noon, nah homie
Hold them bitches straighter up, wave 'em 'til you dislocate a rotator cuff
Came up rough, came to ruffle feathers, nah, egos
I ain't deflate enough, last chance to make this whole stadium erupt cause


ill multisyllable rhyming.
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Re: Best Multis

Postby Eedee » Nov 12th, '13, 02:07

^ He finally gets it!
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Re: Best Multis

Postby Mr Change » Nov 12th, '13, 02:13

ronnie56 wrote:
EminemInsider wrote:Probably my favorite multis from MMLP 2:

I'm trying to be lowkey, hopefully nobody notices me
In produce, hunched over, giant nosebleed
Ogre style as I mosey over to the frozen aisle
By the frozen yogurt this guy approached me
Embarrassed, I just did Comerica with Hova
Show's over, I'm hiding in Kroger buying groceries
He just had front row seats, told me to sign this poster
Then insults me "wow, up close didn't know you had crow's feet"

It's just so intricate and woven together.

I especially like how "sign this poster" can work with "buying grocer," although he had to pick whether to pronounce it as 2 or 3 syllables to choose whether it would go with that or the "giant nosebleed" scheme.

Plenty of inverse stuff and hidden stuff in there, too. giant nose and guy approached/frozen ai(sle). over gi(ant)/frozen ai(sle).



Wasn't ready to be no millionaire, I was ill-prepared
I was prepared to be ill though, the skill was there
From the beginning, it wasn't bout the ends
It was bout busting raps and standing for something, fuck an acronym
Cut the fucking act like you're happy, I'm fucking back again
With another anthem, why stop when it doesn't have to end
It ain't over 'til I say it's over – enough when I say enough
Throw me to them wolves and close the gate up
I'm afraid of what'll happen to them wolves
When the thought of being thrown into an alligator pit, I salivate at it
Wait is up, hands up like it's 12 noon, nah homie
Hold them bitches straighter up, wave 'em 'til you dislocate a rotator cuff
Came up rough, came to ruffle feathers, nah, egos
I ain't deflate enough, last chance to make this whole stadium erupt cause


ill multisyllable rhyming.


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Re: Best Multis

Postby Solace » Nov 12th, '13, 02:13

Eedee wrote:^ He finally gets it!

And still misses a lot :flutter:
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Re: Best Multis

Postby ronnie56 » Nov 12th, '13, 23:23

Eedee wrote:^ He finally gets it!


ive been got it it's just i started listening to so many opinions that i should have just went with my opinion but yeah i apologize to u breh.
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Re: Best Multis

Postby ronnie56 » Nov 12th, '13, 23:54

StayWideAwake wrote:
ronnie56 wrote:
Eedee wrote:^ He finally gets it!


ive been got it it's just i started listening to so many opinions that i should have just went with my opinion but yeah i apologize to u breh.

Now just scan over that one more time and see if you can find a couple more.


Now fling that bitch from your fingertips
I hope it lands on another rap singers lips who can't think of shit
Anything of which that's interesting to spit
Who's king of this fucking English lit?
Let your middle fingers flip on each hand, whilst extending this shit


scan over this one u just bolded or the eminem verse where i bolded some of the multis and i apologize to you man.
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Re: Best Multis

Postby ronnie56 » Nov 13th, '13, 00:21

StayWideAwake wrote:
ronnie56 wrote:

Wasn't ready to be no millionaire, I was ill-prepared
I was prepared to be ill though, the skill was there
From the beginning, it wasn't bout the ends
It was bout busting raps and standing for something, fuck an acronym
Cut the fucking act like you're happy, I'm fucking back again
With another anthem, why stop when it doesn't have to end
It ain't over 'til I say it's over – enough when I say enough
Throw me to them wolves and close the gate up
I'm afraid of what'll happen to them wolves
When the thought of being thrown into an alligator pit, I salivate at it
Wait is up, hands up like it's 12 noon, nah homie
Hold them bitches straighter up, wave 'em 'til you dislocate a rotator cuff
Came up rough, came to ruffle feathers, nah, egos
I ain't deflate enough, last chance to make this whole stadium erupt cause


ill multisyllable rhyming.


scan over this one u just bolded or the eminem verse where i bolded some of the multis and i apologize to you man.

The one you posted. Just little extra stuff.

Doesn't have to end/fucking back again/wasn't bout the ends
Came to ruff(le) goes with (de)flate enough
and even though the syllables are a little off "stadium erupt" goes with that as well.

I was going to say the "say enough",gate up, "(a)fraid of what" but you already fixed it

No worries. You are definitely on the right course now.


well the syllables can be irregular but not that irregular like one syllable off but nore more then one syllable off imo

what u think
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Re: Best Multis

Postby ronnie56 » Nov 13th, '13, 00:36

StayWideAwake wrote:When I listen to it, it really sounds like it is intended to go with that rhyme pattern even though the syllables are off. If you think it's awkward for highlighting's sake then that's up to you tbh.


well i mean it think rhyming 3 to 4 syllables or 5 to 6 syllables or however many syllables as long it is near flawless or flawless structure its ok as long as long as the syllables match up or near perfect in structure.

like rhyming that way is more expecteable then stringing a 5 syllable then stringing that with a 10 syllable rhyme imo that is what i was trying to stay.
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Re: Best Multis

Postby ronnie56 » Nov 13th, '13, 01:25

Took time to create cause there's money to make
To be a billionaire takes hard work for years


(mon)ey to make 3 syllables
create 2 syllables

this still works imo it is near flawless imo.
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Re: Best Multis

Postby Eedee » Nov 13th, '13, 01:34

ronnie56 wrote:Took time to create cause there's money to make
To be a billionaire takes hard work for years


(mon)ey to make 3 syllables
create 2 syllables

this still works imo it is near flawless imo.


Aaaaaaaaaand he's relapsed.

Ronnie Gump.
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Re: Best Multis

Postby ronnie56 » Nov 13th, '13, 01:48

Eedee wrote:
ronnie56 wrote:Took time to create cause there's money to make
To be a billionaire takes hard work for years


(mon)ey to make 3 syllables
create 2 syllables

this still works imo it is near flawless imo.


Aaaaaaaaaand he's relapsed.

Ronnie Gump.


breh i was giving him a example lmao it is still a multi to me.
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Re: Best Multis

Postby Eedee » Nov 13th, '13, 01:53

ronnie56 wrote:
Eedee wrote:
ronnie56 wrote:Took time to create cause there's money to make
To be a billionaire takes hard work for years


(mon)ey to make 3 syllables
create 2 syllables

this still works imo it is near flawless imo.


Aaaaaaaaaand he's relapsed.

Ronnie Gump.


breh i was giving him a example lmao it is still a multi to me.


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Re: Best Multis

Postby Solace » Nov 13th, '13, 02:04

Ronnie's saying create and ney to make rhyme if you exclude the "to", so it's not necessarily a perfect rhyme but it's still a multi.

create/ne-make

Slug does that kind of shit often

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Re: Best Multis

Postby ronnie56 » Nov 13th, '13, 02:08

Solace wrote:Ronnie's saying create and ney to make rhyme if you exclude the "to", so it's not necessarily a perfect rhyme but it's still a multi.

create/ne-make

Slug does that kind of shit often


no i was saying it is still a multisyllable rhyme imo even though one string is 3 syllables and the other is 2 syllables imo
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Re: Best Multis

Postby Solace » Nov 13th, '13, 02:16

ronnie56 wrote:
Solace wrote:Ronnie's saying create and ney to make rhyme if you exclude the "to", so it's not necessarily a perfect rhyme but it's still a multi.

create/ne-make

Slug does that kind of shit often


no i was saying it is still a multisyllable rhyme imo even though one string is 3 syllables and the other is 2 syllables imo

That's literally exactly what I just said
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