I get it. You want to grow, you want to change, you want rap to stay fresh and exciting.
And I'm glad Em, but, it's OK to just rhyme sometimes. Just straight forward bars. Not yell/whisper, not speed up, slow down. Just straight going in.
He does it here and there on the album. Baby is one of the best examples for a full song.
"I got a laptop in my back pocket
My pen'll go off when I half-cock it
Got a fat knot from that rap profit"
"Enough rhymes to maybe try to help get some people through tough times
But I gotta keep a few punchlines just in case cause even you unsigned
Rappers are hungry looking at me like it's lunchtime
I know there was a time where once I Was king of the underground
But I still rap like I'm on my Pharoahe Monch grind
So I crunch rhymes, but sometimes when you combine
Appeal with the skin color of mine
You get too big and here they come trying to censor you
Like that one line I said on "I'm Back" from the Mathers LP1
When I tried to say I take seven kids from Columbine
Put em all in a line, add an AK-47, a revolver and a nine"
And somehow I saw my future is in this, that's how I know myAnnotate mission
Little boom box booming, spitting, practicing numerous writtens
When I sit in my room envisioning my dreams come to fruition
Who just happened to be a rapper who just happen to be on the crapper
When it happened I had an epiphany in the bathroom
I'd never be the same after, now I'm back with an apper-
-tite for destruction the fuckin' recipe for disaster
It's here and there. Smooth bars. Smooth flow. Rap a word or two in a bar, make the next bar have a word or two in it. Not this all over the place stuff.
For an album "taking it back to straight hip hop" it sounds pretty experimental for the most part.