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So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby Notalius » Dec 27th, '13, 21:45

"Bitch, where the fuck were you Tuesday? With who you say?
I wasn't at the studio, bitch, what'cha do? Screw Dre?
You went there looking for me? Boo, that excuse is too lame
Keep playing me you're gonna end up with a huge goose egg
You fake, lying slut you never told me you knew Drake
And Lupe? You want to lose two legs?
You trying to flip this on me? If I spent more time with you, you say
"Okay, yeah and I'm coo-coo, ay?"
Well, screw you, and I'll be the third person who screwed you today
Oh, four; Dre, Drake, Lupe -- oohm touché
You were too two-faced for me, thought you was my number one, true-blue ace
But you ain't
And I can't see you when you make that wittle boo-boo face
Cause I'm hanging up this phone, boo
You make my fucking blue tooth ache
You're feeling blue? Too late
Go smurf yourself, you make me wanna smurf and puke blue Kool Aid
Here's what you say to someone you hate"

Like really, what the fuck was he thinking putting out this piece of shit
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby kkaniff » Dec 27th, '13, 21:48

Not even close.
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 27th, '13, 21:48

Flow may have been a bit awkward at times but I still like the verse.
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby Raul » Dec 27th, '13, 21:53

Mediocre verse. Not WOAT, come on.
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby Notalius » Dec 27th, '13, 21:54

I meant WOAT as in WOAT verse where he was actually serious or not on drugs. We all know that the leaked songs including fack don't count. But this shit is cringe-worthy
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby kkaniff » Dec 27th, '13, 21:56

Do you mean content, flow or both?
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby Notalius » Dec 27th, '13, 21:57

kkaniff wrote:Do you mean content, flow or both?


both including lyrics, but that kinda ties in with content I guess

Thank god that the other verses are so much better(pun intended)
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 27th, '13, 21:58

While it is partly subjective I can tell you objectively this is not his WOAT.
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby Notalius » Dec 27th, '13, 22:02

Horsebot3K wrote:
Charlotte Mathers wrote:So Much Better GOAT track

Not the best verse but yeah, it's okay I guess, I like the flow, it's just him being mad and saying things impulsive or something

Word. It's not the best verse and the lyrics are nothing special on paper, but the song's appeal is in the delivery and that dope hook. Plus, I find the Smurf shit pretty funny tbh.

Worst verse on the album is definitely STIW.


I disagree tbh. STIW is not the woat verse. Some of this shit on So much better is corny as fuck. Everything that most people hated on recovery thrown into one verse. And that delivery is really bad on verse 1. Everything else is good, but nothing special either.
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby yoda you can call me » Dec 27th, '13, 22:06

During a period towards the beginning of the album leak, i almost wanted to skip the track because of the way he flows this verse over the beat. There was something very off putting about it.
But as the time frame between the bumping of this album as gotten bigger, i don't mind it anymore.
I wouldn't say it was one of his WOAT verses in terms of lyrics, see Recovery, Fack and Wee Wee :p
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby Notalius » Dec 27th, '13, 22:08

yoda you can call me wrote:During a period towards the beginning of the album leak, i almost wanted to skip the track because of the way he flows this verse over the beat. There was something very off putting about it.
But as the time frame between the bumping of this album as gotten bigger, i don't mind it anymore.
I wouldn't say it was one of his WOAT verses in terms of lyrics, see Recovery, Fack and Wee Wee :p


I'd actually take a lot of Recovery verses over that particular verse.

Like objectively speaking, even though we all know music is subjective, these lines, especially the bluetooth shit are some of his worst ever. It's not even fair.
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby kkaniff » Dec 27th, '13, 22:12

I thought the bluetooth line was clever, I didn't like the l-l-lesbian line.
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby Notalius » Dec 27th, '13, 22:13

kkaniff wrote:I thought the bluetooth line was clever, I didn't like the l-l-lesbian line.


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How is the bluetooth shit clever ? It's just awkward ffs
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby Raul » Dec 27th, '13, 22:14

Calling the verse terrible is overreacting. It is not great, maybe even not good, but terrible?

On the paper, it's kind of bad. But on the song it does sound okay.
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby kkaniff » Dec 27th, '13, 22:18

Seriously, I was like bluetooth/toothache. Heh.
I'd heard the lesbian line before so...
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