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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby yoda you can call me » Dec 27th, '13, 22:35

Notalius wrote:
yoda you can call me wrote:During a period towards the beginning of the album leak, i almost wanted to skip the track because of the way he flows this verse over the beat. There was something very off putting about it.
But as the time frame between the bumping of this album as gotten bigger, i don't mind it anymore.
I wouldn't say it was one of his WOAT verses in terms of lyrics, see Recovery, Fack and Wee Wee :p


I'd actually take a lot of Recovery verses over that particular verse.

Like objectively speaking, even though we all know music is subjective, these lines, especially the bluetooth shit are some of his worst ever. It's not even fair.

Yeah, i see what you mean about some of the cheap punchlines, but i never got that cringe response that i usually get with other lines he's spat in the past. It was more about the delivery over the beat for me, but that sounds ok to me now
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby Kill You » Dec 27th, '13, 22:42

Not really. Lol. He's had WAY worse than this, trust me.
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby kkaniff » Dec 27th, '13, 23:05

It's not a cheap punchline if it makes sense on it's own.
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby xYnDart » Dec 27th, '13, 23:14

Nah man.
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby Kangol » Dec 28th, '13, 00:16

Oh wow oh aww
I need a cigarette now
oh I'm so fucking hot and your so fuckin hot
Oh my God
I wanna facking fack
No, not fuck
I said fack
F A C K F A C K
fack fack facking freak me
oh yeah girl c baby
They call me mr freaky
Lets call your sister threeway
Have some threesome
Me so horny
And your such a fuckin babe
I wanna go down on u
Fack u shave
Oh god damn
here I go again
I'm gonna cum, I am

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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby Kangol » Dec 28th, '13, 00:39

Charlotte Mathers wrote:
Kangol wrote:Oh wow oh aww
I need a cigarette now
oh I'm so fucking hot and your so fuckin hot
Oh my God
I wanna facking fack
No, not fuck
I said fack
F A C K F A C K
fack fack facking freak me
oh yeah girl c baby
They call me mr freaky
Lets call your sister threeway
Have some threesome
Me so horny
And your such a fuckin babe
I wanna go down on u
Fack u shave
Oh god damn
here I go again
I'm gonna cum, I am

kk


Don't you see the good lyricism in that? Damn son, you gotta understand concept.
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omg he used the name of the song like 24times in one verse
cant believe i missed that
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby Notalius » Dec 28th, '13, 00:50

Kangol wrote:Oh wow oh aww
I need a cigarette now
oh I'm so fucking hot and your so fuckin hot
Oh my God
I wanna facking fack
No, not fuck
I said fack
F A C K F A C K
fack fack facking freak me
oh yeah girl c baby
They call me mr freaky
Lets call your sister threeway
Have some threesome
Me so horny
And your such a fuckin babe
I wanna go down on u
Fack u shave
Oh god damn
here I go again
I'm gonna cum, I am

kk


Read one of my posts. Everyone knows he put fack on the curtain call to troll. It's not even an excuse lol
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby EminemBase » Dec 28th, '13, 07:04

No wtf. How is it even bad...
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby EminemBase » Dec 28th, '13, 07:07

Charlotte Mathers wrote:
Horsebot3K wrote:Worst verse on the album is definitely STIW.


Not truue

"ONE SHEEP 2 SHEEP GOING COCONN WHATEVER HE SAYS HERE YODALIEEEHOOH"

but yeah I love the STIW verse tbh, but the word on that one is very diversed on this forum it seems


What?

'Going cukoo and kooky as Kool Keith'', that's dope. ''Monster' verses are good.
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby Amadeo » Dec 28th, '13, 07:34

Charlotte Mathers wrote:
Horsebot3K wrote:Worst verse on the album is definitely STIW.


Not truue

"ONE SHEEP 2 SHEEP GOING COCONN WHATEVER HE SAYS HERE YODALIEEEHOOH"

but yeah I love the STIW verse tbh, but the word on that one is very diversed on this forum it seems

What is wrong with "one sheep, two sheep"?

The STIW gets corny when he says "lump me in with those chumpions," but it's nowhere near his worst sober verse.

You can tell So Much Better's first verse was structured around the first line he wrote ("you make my Blue Tooth ache") and his recent insistence on sticking to the same rhyme scheme for long periods of time. It's mediocre...again, nowhere near his worst.
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby Amadeo » Dec 28th, '13, 07:35

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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby Amadeo » Dec 28th, '13, 07:35

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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby Crazee » Dec 28th, '13, 20:47

Eminem fans are so hyper hyper critical. If one verse here or there isn't elite Renegade stuff, than it sucks.

It's an average verse technically, but it's kind of dope how he's rhyming one side of a phone conversation without having to force in ad-libs and shit to show what she's saying. It's kind of simple rhyme scheme wise, but it's just a nice set up for why he's pissed at this random bitch.

Staying ontopic with a decent concept with the same rhyme scheme for a verse isn't easy shit, so I appreciate it as a former songwriter.
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby cheeseburger » Dec 28th, '13, 21:21

Dislike this song, disagrees with OP
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Re: So much better first verse - One of his WOAT ?

Postby Sea triscuit » Dec 28th, '13, 23:55

I like the verse and the way he flows it, I don't really see what's corny about it
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