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Your favorite rhymeschemes from MMLP2

Postby csw621 » Feb 20th, '14, 23:36

Here are mine

Bad Guy - "I am your lack of a conscience ... Make sure you're packin a wallop"
Rhyme Or Reason - "Who's your daddy? I don't have one ... Rick Rubin my little padawan"
So Much Better - "Tuesday, with who you say? ... What you say to someone you hate"
Survival - "What you eat, sleep, piss and shit ... Your pliers and your screwdrivers!"
Legacy - "Always think the sky is falling ... And I am the Fire Marshall"
Asshole - "On the planet Earth, I smacked a girl ... It's safe to say I'm uncrackable"
Berzerk - "Cough syrup in styrofoam ... Unless you're a swallow"
Rap God - "You assumin I'm a human ... Verses that versus you it's"
Brainless - "Starting to blend in more ... Like an independent store"
Stronger Than I Was - "Coulda took my life you woulda ... This morning I finally stood up"
The Monster - "I have this vision ... I'm still friends with the"
So Far... - "Hopefully nobody notices me ... Know you had crow's feet!"
Love Game - "I'm feelin' betrayed ... Wait dinner at 8?"
Headlights - "And I hate it though ... Your best to raise us both"
Evil Twin - "Never make it to sophomore ... That third and that fourth spot's for?"
Baby - "Whitey Ford and Mighty Thor ... Formal warning you're in for it"
Desperation - "I did to meet ya ... Too good for me huh"
Groundhog Day - "I wasn't superstitious ... It became my new religion"
Beautiful Pain - "Cause you're weakened ... Through this feeling"
Wicked Ways - "A fuck I don't play ... With my wicked ways"
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Re: Your favorite rhymeschemes from MMLP2?

Postby Solace » Feb 21st, '14, 00:07

Evil Twin - "prepare your arsenal...take this beat now, it's all you"
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Re: Your favorite rhymeschemes from MMLP2?

Postby TheBoss123 » Feb 21st, '14, 06:06

this part from groundhog day- "promisin complete dominance... Tomlinson"

Bad Guy, the whole beat change part till "make sure youre packin a wallop"
" Life can change your directions, even when you ain't planned it
All you can do it handle it, worst thing you can do is panic
Use it to your advantage, avoid insanity manage
To conquer, every obstacle, make impossible possible
Even when winning illogical, losing is still far from optional.." -T.I.
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Re: Your favorite rhymeschemes from MMLP2?

Postby Elision » Feb 21st, '14, 07:38

first verse of don't front. doesn't get much better than that.
i'm comin in, drivin my short bus
with this nose i don't need a torch up
bustin through, light the industry's porsche up
comin after who didn't support us...
imma change your brain bring
every wicked bit of strange to mainstream
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Re: Your favorite rhymeschemes from MMLP2?

Postby Amadeo » Feb 21st, '14, 09:43

Cut my grass/pump my gas/fuckin trash/stomach gas/upper class scheme from first verse of So Far

Crow's feet scheme from So Far

'Succumb to it/Recovery was so highly coveted/fumble it' was a really smooth, cool scheme from So Far

Debbie Mathers/deadbeat dad was/every mattress scheme from Headlights

Opening scheme from Evil Twin is dope

The two rhyme schemes in first verse of Brainless are very nicely done

almost died/homicide/traumatized/Bonnie & Clyde scheme from Stronger Than I Was

Whitey Ford/Mighty Thor scheme from Baby

Addict's brain/static pain scheme from Baby

The A-B scheme in The Monster's third verse is growing on me
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Re: Your favorite rhymeschemes from MMLP2?

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Feb 22nd, '14, 12:50

This sounds too good, even though Em sounded panic-rapping the entire second verse, it was pretty awesome


no sense dwelling makes
Never been a more compelling case
Than the model covered in L'Oreal and mace
Who fell from grace eleven stories for storytelling
While the whore was yelling, "Rape"
'Til her vocal cords were swelling
And her voice were more hoarser than Tori Spellings' face
Still they swarm the gates
And my fancy estates to greet Norman Bates with a warm embrace
The devil ain't on a level same as him!
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Re: Your favorite rhymeschemes from MMLP2?

Postby DetroitSkills » Feb 22nd, '14, 14:00

Menzo wrote:Formal warning part on "Baby".

hell yea
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Re: Your favorite rhymeschemes from MMLP2

Postby Coulter » Feb 22nd, '14, 18:52

"Stable mentally, I ain't...peep my game" from Wicked Ways. My favorite verse from the album.
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Re: Your favorite rhymeschemes from MMLP2

Postby Supershade » Feb 22nd, '14, 20:37

Promising complete dominance,
Sugar Ray Robinson,
I’m in the league Muhammed’s in,
Ali’s my colleague, bombin them,
Probably end up on top of them,
Stomping them like Ndamukong,
I’m rushin like a Ukrainian LaDainian Tomlinson.
Cause I can’t explain to y’all how dang exhausted my legs felt, just having to balance my dang self but on eggshells I was made to walk but thank you, ma, ‘cause that gave me the strength to cause Shady-mania
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Re: Your favorite rhymeschemes from MMLP2

Postby Mr Change » Feb 22nd, '14, 20:52

Supershade wrote: I’m rushin like a Ukrainian LaDainian Tomlinson.

one of the best lines on the album tbh :laughing:
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Haters started to appreciate my art
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But what am I gonna do when the rage is gone?
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Re: Your favorite rhymeschemes from MMLP2

Postby Excita » Feb 23rd, '14, 00:42

InsaneTRex94 wrote:I'm not really going to highlight the rhyme schemes or anything but the way he uses the words on this bit of Rhyme Or Reason is probably my favorite part of the song, and one of my favorite moments of the album, particularly the bolded part but I couldn't leave out the rest:

...for content
Completely, despondent and condescending
The king of nonsense and controversy is on a
beat killing spree
Your honor, I must plead guilty, cause I sparked a revolution
Rebel without a cause who caused the evolution
Of rap, to take it to the next level, boost it
But several rebuked it, and whoever produced it
("Hip-hop is the devil's music")...


I was just listening to Rhyme Or Reason again today and when it got to that part I had to rewind it because I never noticed how crazy that part is, and the kind of care he had to put into thinking of what to say there.

I've decided that it's my favorite song on the album.

i always get goosebumps on that part. :y:
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Re: Your favorite rhymeschemes from MMLP2

Postby Eedee » Feb 23rd, '14, 08:11

The "met their grandma" scheme in Headlights verse 2. It basically goes on for half the verse, which is still a lot of bars.
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Re: Your favorite rhymeschemes from MMLP2

Postby shadyblogger » Feb 23rd, '14, 16:36

So many to choose from...

The "superstitious" rhyme scheme on Groundhog Day is fucking insane though
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