Menzo wrote:"Better call the fire department
I've hired an arson to set fire to carpet
And burn up your entire apartment"
Sounds so smooth...the whole freestyle is just ridiculous.
Menzo wrote:"Better call the fire department
I've hired an arson to set fire to carpet
And burn up your entire apartment"
Sounds so smooth...the whole freestyle is just ridiculous.
Menzo wrote:metsfan1121 wrote:Menzo wrote:"Better call the fire department
I've hired an arson to set fire to carpet
And burn up your entire apartment"
Sounds so smooth...the whole freestyle is just ridiculous.
This freestyle is sick but I can't stand that he missed the obvious rhyme in "pair" of horns over the choice "set" of horns.
Yeah, but then "set of horns" goes with "metaphors".
Amadeo wrote:Elision wrote:i wonder if he spent more time writing relapse or mmlp2
relapse is so densely packed with intricate rhymes for days, but mmlp2 is just so smooth and cohesive lyrically, i wonder which is harder to do for him.
MMLP2, easily. No debate.
He was shitting songs out in the Relapse sessions. Multis were falling out of his pantspocket, he can't stop it.
MMLP2's writing is harder to do and takes more time to organize. There's detailed rhyme schemes combined with wordplay, combined with story telling and conceptual writing, not to mention the various challenges he set himself of sticking to one scheme for entire songs/verses.
Menzo wrote:ronnie56 wrote:sup menzo i don't hear that as a " clean rhyme " imo
set of horns would rhyme perfectly with metaporn but obviously that would'nt make sense
It's only fair to warn
I was born with a set of horns
it's just a 2 syllable rhyme that's the way i see it
but that entire verse was ridiculous imo
What up?
While the 'was born' probably tucks in somewhere in there, it's pretty obvious that 'set of horns/metaphors' go together lol.
StillShaady- wrote:The one man on the planet that'll drive off of the Grand Canyon
Hop out of a Grand Am and land in it handstandin
I murder a rhyme one word at a time
You never, heard of a mind as perverted as mine
You better, get rid of that nine, it ain’t gonna help
What good’s it gonna do against a man that strangles himself?
I’m waitin for hell like hell shit I’m anxious as hell
Manson, you’re safe in that cell, be thankful it’s jail
The criminal cop-killing hip hop villain
A minimal swap to cop millions of Pac listeners
StillShaady- wrote:The one man on the planet that'll drive off of the Grand Canyon
Hop out of a Grand Am and land in it handstandin
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