Pixel - Broken Homes

[Pixel]

Here's my new song that i wrote, performed and produced, its an epic dark track about drug abuse, check it out!

Link: http://youtu.be/jhY33A6UmCU

Feedback: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=171957

[Aslawik]

I have a similar song and I feel I relate. Pains real.. lyrics affects cool too

[Supershade]

Sounds off

[Pixel]

Sounds off

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[MistaVijilantee]

Great lyrics, mic quality isn't too bad.
My only critique would be to put a bit more expression in your voice - this usually comes with practice - also the chorus is good
Glad to see a fellow Aussie?

[Pixel]

Great lyrics, mic quality isn't too bad.
My only critique would be to put a bit more expression in your voice - this usually comes with practice - also the chorus is good
Glad to see a fellow Aussie?

Thanks for the feedback ^.^

Yep, from victoria

[Mr.DGAF]

I really like the lyrics here dude. That was the standout for me on the song. Your delivery could use some practice; your flow isn't terrible, but sometimes you cram syllables and that causes you to slur some words/makes it hard to understand. Mic quality wasn't great, it sounded kinda crispy (if that makes sense (it probably doesn't)). There were points where the beat overpowered the vocals too. Just work on delivery and maybe some punch in's to help the flow on some of those rushed parts.

[Pixel]

I really like the lyrics here dude. That was the standout for me on the song. Your delivery could use some practice; your flow isn't terrible, but sometimes you cram syllables and that causes you to slur some words/makes it hard to understand. Mic quality wasn't great, it sounded kinda crispy (if that makes sense (it probably doesn't)). There were points where the beat overpowered the vocals too. Just work on delivery and maybe some punch in's to help the flow on some of those rushed parts.

Thanks for the feed man!
I'll think about what you said