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ThomasAguanis vs. Invincibile

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ThomasAguanis vs. Invincibile

Postby ThomasAguanis » Aug 22nd, '06, 04:10

16 lines (8 bars if you do it that way)
1 round
no flip/feed
deadline: Thursday 12am Eastern Time (GMT -5:00)
first to 5 votes
all votes must be explained using the voting standerd thing that seems to be used on rap dogs:
Flow-
Punches-
Complexity-
Wordplay-
Metaphors-
Humor-
Creativity-
Personals-
Vocab-
Multies-
Nameplay-



this is my check.
check and say if you agree with rules/want anything changed
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Postby Invincibile » Aug 22nd, '06, 04:16

rules look str8.

heres ma check.
g'luck

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AhA...
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Postby Invincibile » Aug 23rd, '06, 01:14

jus 2 make my final point on here.......
lets get it



WARM-UP


listen..war needs two equally matched groups..so a feud cant be born..
fuck wif J? ur face'll get scraped like keepin food in a plate 2 long..
listen u child..u at the BACK of the line hits is dislocatin ur SPINE..
cut off 1 of my fingers n slap ya, now u gettin hit wit a nine..*

I'll give u da patch dude..this is my WIN..clean dis scab n get this cat bruised..
^ my motto..I'll make u CY(sigh) YOUNG..wen i throw dese PITCHES at u..
ur skills is a MISTAKE..so how can u claim u spittin ON a PURPOSE?..
when will u learn trick?..peeps see holy shit when u put bibles near ur verses..

IGGHT PLAYTIMES OVER!!
GET IT


C how dis fag lingers? I'll be goin back to da index when I snap da otha 8 of T.A's fingers
..I bring pain bruh.. claim u nice but always fail to ignite da fire like u in a Gas Chamber!

u whack cuz..da kid'll leave u BOXed in an OFFICE like old films from actors..
..from da last of ur battles ur SKILL stays da same like the word LEVEL backwards


better bounce b4 i burst da techs dude have u as practice for search n rescue , get flamed like thai food, plus he cudnt be tight in wrap even if he was mummified duke...**


look dunny, you aint a thug, prolly a church boy and the main clergy.. shadys rhymes will hurt B.. TRUST HE..
kill you location style.. I got the gats 2 disperse T, so when I pop at ya chest it'll b filled wit red,so he'll need a New Jersey!!..***


EXPLANATIONS
*nine fingers, a nine is also a weapon

**wraps=mummified/rap=rapping wordplay...

***he's from NJ..

jus did it while i had time... definitely jus a key but eh.....
g'luck


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ShAdY J

AhA...
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Postby polluted » Aug 24th, '06, 04:40

cut off 1 of my fingers n slap ya, now u gettin hit wit a nine..*



i liked the punch alot....and flow pretty much there

but you killed my like with your Gs shit and techs, e-thug.
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 24th, '06, 05:05

no offense but why is it that rapdogs always type in bold lettering and add color to their text?????????/
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Postby polluted » Aug 24th, '06, 05:46

steverocks88 wrote:no offense but why is it that rapdogs always type in bold lettering and add color to their text?????????/


lol....
because they believe people are going to buy it and see what they want everybody to see. Like 25th shot, you know.
But it's a wack-technique...it kills whole perception of rhyme because you start wondering over why the heck that pla bolded the words and italic'd some words and so....

wack wack habit...

lol
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 24th, '06, 06:17

polluted wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:no offense but why is it that rapdogs always type in bold lettering and add color to their text?????????/


lol....
because they believe people are going to buy it and see what they want everybody to see. Like 25th shot, you know.
But it's a wack-technique...it kills whole perception of rhyme because you start wondering over why the heck that pla bolded the words and italic'd some words and so....

wack wack habit...

lol


yep your right :laughing:
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Postby Block » Aug 24th, '06, 06:21

vinceable why'd you drop here? they don't know shit.. i've used this expression before: it's like highschool-chumps (them) in a fight with princeton (us).. serious. they so fucking dumb, they don't know that they don't know, lol.

anyway.. is thomas dropping?
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 24th, '06, 06:25

k block wrote:vinceable why'd you drop here? they don't know shit.. i've used this expression before: it's like highschool-chumps (them) in a fight with princeton (us).. serious. they so fucking dumb, they don't know that they don't know, lol.

anyway.. is thomas dropping?


dude seriously how old are you??
cause if your over 22 years old you have NO LIFE too start this kind of shit and if your 15 years old you are just a weak ass shit talker lol
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Postby Infliction » Aug 24th, '06, 06:29

fuck princeton man only steers and queers come from princeton
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 24th, '06, 06:30

plaspp wrote:fuck princeton man only steers and queers come from princeton


hah lmao!!
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Postby polluted » Aug 24th, '06, 06:32

plaspp wrote:fuck princeton man only steers and queers come from princeton

lol

word up :D
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Postby Block » Aug 24th, '06, 07:01

plaspp wrote:fuck princeton man only steers and queers come from princeton


think you need a lil more education, my lil friend. you're princeton's in NJ. not TEXAS, dumbass.

stevesuxcock - i'm 18 big guy.

how polluted sayin 'word up' like he gangster? kid you from australia, don't act like you know shit bout america.
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Postby polluted » Aug 24th, '06, 07:30

k block wrote:
plaspp wrote:fuck princeton man only steers and queers come from princeton


think you need a lil more education, my lil friend. you're princeton's in NJ. not TEXAS, dumbass.

stevesuxcock - i'm 18 big guy.

how polluted sayin 'word up' like he gangster? kid you from australia, don't act like you know shit bout america.


knock it off k, just don't tell me what and how I should express myself, 'aiiiiit'?
You're not my age to mentor me, kid.
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Postby Block » Aug 24th, '06, 08:03

polluted wrote:
k block wrote:
plaspp wrote:fuck princeton man only steers and queers come from princeton


think you need a lil more education, my lil friend. you're princeton's in NJ. not TEXAS, dumbass.

stevesuxcock - i'm 18 big guy.

how polluted sayin 'word up' like he gangster? kid you from australia, don't act like you know shit bout america.


knock it off k, just don't tell me what and how I should express myself, 'aiiiiit'?
You're not my age to mentor me, kid.


dude.. haha. you sounded like a little kid. haha... if you put on a gay lisp voice to the bolded letters, hahaha would sound like ya flirtin wit me. hahahahah
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