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Gifted Rage

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Gifted Rage

Postby WrathDog » Aug 25th, '06, 15:24

When you dance up to me
I make you see
What it's like to flow and make everyone know
Your fucking name and I am not playin this rap game
I do this shit for fun but if you're gonna judge then die by this gun

Can't fuck with the one who is the son of the devil in all his might
This is not even considered a fight?
Course not you're a child and when I fuck with flows with kids it's mild
When you fall ima be still standing tall and knockin rhymes and all these times
I have seen you run your mouth is when I get wicked with rage and when they release me from
my cage it'll be the end of it all cause you know Ima recall all the shit you did before I
Pull the trigger of this gun and leave your corpse under the bright hot son
I hope you had a good life cause this is where it stops
May the power invested in me send you to satan for torture and pain
And when it drives you insane?Ima laugh so god damn fucking hard
Now look who is the retard! never should have fucked around and made me mad!
But now,Hell I am glad!


This is my first time writting text so I don't know how to phrase or align it but ya.My friends are having me do some sort of freestyle with a beat and Ima laugh so hard

I know I am a rookie to this stuff so go easy please, :whistle:

EDIT:Sorry Posted in wrong section, Didn't know.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 25th, '06, 15:27

nice work man i liek ti some pretty nice rythmes keep it up :D
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Postby WrathDog » Aug 25th, '06, 15:28

Bar wrote:nice work man i liek ti some pretty nice rythmes keep it up :D



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