Battling lesson from mc cubz

[Mc Cubz]

The first thing to realise when your new to battling is don

[ThomasAguanis]

great lesson
this should really help people starting out
we(meaning anyone here) should advise whoever's new to battling to read this.
it's a bit long but would help beginners out a lot

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i go to wordplay and my eyes are sore ill read the rest tommorrow :d

what i read is really good stuff thx for the help

[Mc Cubz]

i go to wordplay and my eyes are sore ill read the rest tommorrow :d

what i read is really good stuff thx for the help

lol ye sory about tht it is very long - thanks for readin tho, ur a good battler so u probs know most of it if not all lol.

[Block]

i think Wordplay / Multis n metas are the key to text battling.

[Mc Cubz]

i think Wordplay / Multis n metas are the key to text battling.

they definately are bro, its just sometimes people make verses that dont make sense when they go over their head with rhyming as I said in the lesson.

[Block]

yeah. I hear ya. I see that alot here and on the RD1 section in RapDogs.

[Inches]

thanks man ill try to put thes to good use

[Mc Cubz]

YO YO ok I just wrote a verse for a collab im doing with this london mc (prince valiant). And although this is not a battle verse, and thus lacks the personal impact, it is effective to target audiences, and is laced with the skills I've been talking about. The thing is I duno how much of it peeps will realise, like bit about hoes/wetness is refering to women getting horney but it is a play on the word hose i.e. garden hosepipe, (I dont expect anyone to get this because it has just started out in manchester, but wet also means blood trickling down your body when you have been shot) anyway, see how much I've wrote about one bar, effective multi-layed meaning is achievable for anyone who feels this is beyond them. If you look at the earlier bars, not only am I saying all this about wet hoes/hose, but there is a theme of water through the word navy, and the word crews doubles as the word cruise as in on a ship, and the dock is where boats come to land, and float is associated with water. Believe me I've put this much effort into every verse on here so I hope this example helps some rappers.

fool who are you we rule with more crews than the navy
making you bitches wet like when we use your ladies
float onto the dock she says slow please cos it hurts me
since then I only ever fuck with greece like turkey

vasaline doesnt work see when you go past six hours
it feels to big and burns her like she on one of one of the twin towers
my big power makes hoes wet like I just turned the tap
the words are outplaying throughtout each verse on this track

and for you crew who dont like us this isnt food for the biters
cos if you chose to write like this its hooks we use to strike-yas
so its certain death like you were glued to snipers
by two weighy guys with punches to bruise like tyson

the mood is lightening with words that follow the thunder
taking fakes in eights like octuposus that swallow you under
sorrow and wonder as you out your depth spinnlin like helicopters
heavy breathing bleeding like you mum when I cherry poped-her

[Block]

Not bad shit, Cubez. Here's some of my battles, For reference to Multis / Metas / Wordplays.. Etc.. (For people that need it.)

Quick one I wrote up in bout 20 minutes: Dudes name is THE PROPHET IS HERE

If you a 'Profit', then how's this [b]Loss A 'Shock'? K Beat you like 'Christ' for 'Crossin'-Block!/
Thinkin you a 'Boss'?-Ya-Not! Chain ya ass to a 'Boulder' -N- 'Toss-The-'Rock'!//

This dude ain't 'Aimin Right'! Cause P 'Missin Shots' like 'Blind-Bartenders'!/
P claim his 'Game Is Tight'.. But He 'Fistin Cocks' beHind-Car-Fenders!!//

This whole site Knowin-K-A-'Hype-Fighter'! So 'Box'-Wit-Me -N- Ya Knees-Get-Smashed!/
Like 'Throwin-Away-TypeWriters'.. I'm Rockin-P while his 'Keys-Get-Trashed'!!//