Freestyle [4 Bars]

[.Giorgo.]

Don't look at my english, just at the bars.
4 Bars, a freestyle. Do u like it ? Give some tips.

Yo, listen up.. some new shit.

Yo, yo, I take my glock, i hit you in the /back./
Battle against me ? that's suicide, I'l trow you in a /hatch./

Cold and alone, i kill ya, i put a bullet in ya /head./
You're ice cold than, no one will mis you.. just /dead./

This battle aint done yet, so don't go /runnin'./
Man, fuck you. I go home i aint got time, my girl is /cummin'./

But these last lines will kill ya fool, hillbilly /rapper./
U are useless, nothing. U are just like an old /dust-wrapper./

[Inches]

hmmm well
you said not to look at your grammar
its hard not to notice lol

[Mc Cubz]

Don't look at my english, just at the bars.
4 Bars, a freestyle. Do u like it ? Give some tips.

Yo, listen up.. some new shit.

Yo, yo, I take my glock, i hit you in the /back./
Battle against me ? that's suicide, I'l trow you in a /hatch./

Cold and alone, i kill ya, i put a bullet in ya /head./
You're ice cold than, no one will mis you.. just /dead./

This battle aint done yet, so don't go /runnin'./
Man, fuck you. I go home i aint got time, my girl is /cummin'./

But these last lines will kill ya fool, hillbilly /rapper./
U are useless, nothing. U are just like an old /dust-wrapper./

Im running out the door and wont be able to reply to your reply lol, but just so u knw that is 8 bars, if it is 4 you have put double the amount of words per bar, and it couldnt be rapped over 4 bars (trust me I can do gargage which is busta/twista speed at times and noone says that over 4 bars. Lol I used to do it no prob bro

[Marth]

The wordsa re talking into my brain
but whaz the meaning of this game
to hit you insane?
with my words, my bullets of pain, my bullet rains?

[Coccoa]

That was 8 bars.....aight aight lemme hit ya up with sumthin....

I'm living in Maryland but not of them farmers
Living down is bad but going to top is harder
Aint nobody can stop me, not the cops, nor the deez
Not the bureau, the attorney, or the hoes, nor the gees
I love being loved but i rap for dough
And i am tired of shooting so i slap ya hoes
I told you a dozen time, i think you deaf boy
I ll do what Fif told me and Whip Ya Head Boy

[Marth]

thijs bitch iis good, what is he doing here
he think's he is, i think what you want qeur
you want my lirics hitting you to hard, hahaha, you don't wanna see this
cuz i batle you with my unscattered yet lirycs

[C-Game]

well giorgo u do wat u hv to do
need to practice though and u shld start battlin with ppl
even if u lose/win u will learn
that is if ur intersted in rhymin

[Marth]

dgame, does that supposed to rhyme, is that what it suppposed to be
you nerd, fuckin'roasted me. buddy, it's all closed for me
you sayed; give another rose to me
YES you did, but I used overdose's you see
I didn't cared about you, unfortunatly...."

[skitzophrenick916]

i dont lyk it

[Lil Pimp Tell 'Em]

dgame, does that supposed to rhyme, is that what it suppposed to be
you nerd, fuckin'roasted me. buddy, it's all closed for me
you sayed; give another rose to me
YES you did, but I used overdose's you see
I didn't cared about you, unfortunatly...."

dammit stfu
learn to speak english

@ giorgio
it was good, your grammars gettin better.. atleast to for me because evrythings like startin to like flow, keep practicing

[skitzophrenick916]

i lyk tha marth drop lol dont trip im talkin bout that 4 bar freestyle up top thats weak

[Marth]

dgame, does that supposed to rhyme, is that what it suppposed to be
you nerd, fuckin'roasted me. buddy, it's all closed for me
you sayed; give another rose to me
YES you did, but I used overdose's you see
I didn't cared about you, unfortunatly...."

does that rhymes, is that what is SUPPOSED TO BE
YOu nerd, you Fuckin' Roasted Me, buddy, It's all Closed FOR ME
You sayed: Give another Rose to me.
Yes, you did, But i used the Overdoses you see?
I didn't cared about you, Unfortunatly
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what's unclear about that?