Bar v. Enimee (take 2, lotta lines)

[Enimee]

this dudes so scared hes pacin
bout to take off to mexico but its my time your wastin
cause before you reach your destination
you'll get beat like masturbation
alcohol runs in my veins so i got constant dialation
everybodys just sittin and waitin
well stop your bitchin have some patience
with this battle im settin a mark on the ancients
you know who your facin so your hearts racin
my bois hear i got beef and each of em starts lacin
up them combat boots
and we're lookin for you
dont run you know what bookin'll do
each line gets you shook'n'its true
ill straight digest you dude

i verbally slaughter any mc who want it with me
cant you see the message im depictin for you G?
well baisically, its you dead in a dumpster for facin me
or danglin from a hook, disected, for lacin weed

here ima teach ya the fundamentals of rap
lesson one, dont let other guys sit on your lap
that degrades your gangsta status about a million and a half
lesson two, well simply just dont be wack
thats the kinda shit thatll get you whiplash from a mack
lesson three, never diss somebody lyrically superior, and on crack
that mc is mentally ill and want hesitate to write back

and if you didnt have a clue, that mc is me, so g'night
ill drain you of blood and spirit and the will to fight
have you weepin on your pillow cause no one shares in your plight
your alone cause your wack, cant flow, and you cant write
so curl up into a fetal position and hug your knees tight

ill punch you once in the chest to jump start your heart
when i drive by in my Mustang Boss ill put a part in your car
you never thought i would take it this far
you beat me once and thought you was endin it all

the context in which i speak to this ape
has my words radiating with hate
and for you it is definitly to late
cause to get ripped by this white boy must be your fate

Yo, im sicker then the sickest
put me in the asylum cause i writ this
you'll burst in to flames cause of how i spit this
my words are on fire, enfuriated theres a glock near my wrist
and a brick wall in my fist got you mad cause you didnt make my list

each of my punch lines leaves a bruise
im on autopilot now set it to cruise
yu been here way longer and youll still lose

i got a sniper so acurate ill remove the scope
dawg you should slit your throat, for that shit you wrote
ill have you dead face down in a moat
cause your the only guy i know who gets assfucked by a goat
whatever the fuck floats your boat

ill destroy the vertebrae, of any rapper who's doubles as gay
cause i knock faggots out like Cassius Clay, or ill set the semi on spray
takin out any and every homo in my way, that includes bar cause he does stray

so this is it bitch stop talkin like your better B.
stay over there steamin cause i get your check wetter G.
or my bullets will penetrate that sweater deep
just to put this homosexual he-she to sleep.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

see the thing i find strange is you never have structure BUT in this you do also how it all looks like 4 bars from different raps looks to me as if someone has had a copy and paste job from another forum

none the less ill drop my shit load a lines when i come in from work tommorrow

[Enimee]

what the fuck
ok whatever say what you want, thats all me buddy, no copy and paste, as god is my witness i can swear to that, dont be mad im actually just getting better at writing this shit down

[Deadishot]

[size=100]H

[C-Game]

nice drop enimee btw
this time u got structure

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

what the fuck
ok whatever say what you want, thats all me buddy, no copy and paste, as god is my witness i can swear to that, dont be mad im actually just getting better at writing this shit down

well in my opinion i say you been writing this since our first battle finished i also think you defiantly wrote the first pharagraph the rest im sceptical about

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

also aint got enough time to write that amount a shit , so you gonni have to wait till i find the time coz as off now fifa 07 loks alot better than writing soemthign to beat you

[Enimee]

ok dont talk shit then back out like a little bitch

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

ok dont talk shit then back out like a little bitch

i aint backing out i just got a life and responsoblilities i got to do ya know

[Enimee]

yeah OK i think you just need some time to recuperate from the beating im throwin ya, but thats whatever, you got 2 days to respond or i win by default

[Kez]

What's with the animosity?

[yoshi]

Bar asked me to post it, since he cannot log in.


cant you tell at dont give a shit about this,
a destroy you day in day out no doubt about this,
and you shout about this,so this your official diss,
you slow with this, so a diss it taking the piss,

ill do it praragraph by paragraph, just to make you laugh,
you the bottom of the bar graph im the chief of staff,
but today im firing, and your words tiring not admiring,
my words inspiring yours expiriing you better of retiring,

so come on,how long you think a can go,
long enough to chop you from head to toe,
you giving head for mo', your gay a know,
so as ma flow go to switch you hit the floor,

so as a lyrical machine , a bleed rythmes , a shit metaphor, a piss wordplay,
as you a typical unseen, bleed from ma nines, shit as a tore, piss yourself allday,
you like hear say , like a hear they say your gay,the only way you get sex is pay,
so make way this is like may day , you in disaray with ma text dislplay,

so will a stop now i think not now,
see a disavow your puny meow,
and a disalow, stop fucking a cow,
ill eat you up like puppy chow,

see, they got a saying for me, too far bar, coz a dont give a shit,
a make a personel hit, like your momas clit, lick lick shes on ma dick,
yer dads a prik, yer brothers straight like a boomerang stick,
and yeh sister was slick, apart from she finished too quick,

lets make a list, many battles you won,
a guess bewtween, one and none,
see you think am finished, i only begun,
after this accept you got outdone,

your exscuse i took a long time to write,
the truth i wrote this all tonight,
and if you argue i aint gonni fight,
let them vote youll be finished ai'ght,

the time now is 19:03, i cant do 24 hour clock so thats lets see,
15 minutes after i started, and 10 minutes till you accept your retarded,
so as ma lines bombardered, none disregarded, who the fuck farted,
enimee the culprit tried to hit it but shit it when the girl sticked it,

the thing is everyone has a little respect for me ,
you nothing but a rape suspect do you see,
am bored shitless your rythmes were hitless,
you still aint proved you could even spit this,

this the last line , you see, a just done this and didnt feed one time,

pump = shag

mo' = more

hitless = no good punches

[Enimee]

bar should go kill himself for that post, it was randomly pointless...

so as ma lines bombardered, none disregarded, who the fuck farted,

that was sooooo stupid? "who the fuck farted?" had nothing to do with anything you were just reachin



but whatever i aint hatin lets get them votes

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

bar should go kill himself for that post, it was randomly pointless...

so as ma lines bombardered, none disregarded, who the fuck farted,

that was sooooo stupid? "who the fuck farted?" had nothing to do with anything you were just reachin



but whatever i aint hatin lets get them votes

uhm read the line below it

"so as ma lines bombardered, none disregarded, who the fuck farted,
enimee the culprit tried to hit it but shit it when the girl sticked it,"

dumb fuck

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

and yoshi you didnt post all of it


so you tell me im scared to drop
but last time it was you who flop
see you say its unlimeted lines
so a can fuck about unlimeted times
you know this is gonni be to long to read to ,
they wont vote and thatll mislead you,
thiking that you the on who win,
do your vitcory celebration in your bin,

so when im rythming at you, ill be smiling at you,
and the pressure be piling and compiling at you,
and youll get crushed compressed like a car at the dump,
then you rush and get dressed like a tart for a corner pump,

cant you tell at dont give a shit about this,
a destroy you day in day out no doubt about this,
and you shout about this,so this your official diss,
you slow with this, so a diss it taking the piss,

ill do it praragraph by paragraph, just to make you laugh,
you the bottom of the bar graph im the chief of staff,
but today im firing, and your words tiring not admiring,
my words inspiring yours expiriing you better of retiring,

so come on,how long you think a can go,
long enough to chop you from head to toe,
you giving head for mo', your gay a know,
so as ma flow go to switch you hit the floor,

so as a lyrical machine , a bleed rythmes , a shit metaphor, a piss wordplay,
as you a typical unseen, bleed from ma nines, shit as a tore, piss yourself allday,
you like hear say , like a hear they say your gay,the only way you get sex is pay,
so make way this is like may day , you in disaray with ma text dislplay,

so will a stop now i think not now,
see a disavow your puny meow,
and a disalow, stop fucking a cow,
ill eat you up like puppy chow,

see, they got a saying for me, too far bar, coz a dont give a shit,
a make a personel hit, like your momas clit, lick lick shes on ma dick,
yer dads a prik, yer brothers straight like a boomerang stick,
and yeh sister was slick, apart from she finished too quick,

lets make a list, many battles you won,
a guess bewtween, one and none,
see you think am finished, i only begun,
after this accept you got outdone,

your exscuse i took a long time to write,
the truth i wrote this all tonight,
and if you argue i aint gonni fight,
let them vote youll be finished ai'ght,

the time now is 19:03, i cant do 24 hour clock so thats lets see,
15 minutes after i started, and 10 minutes till you accept your retarded,
so as ma lines bombardered, none disregarded, who the fuck farted,
enimee the culprit tried to hit it but shit it when the girl sticked it,

the thing is everyone has a little respect for me ,
you nothing but a rape suspect do you see,
am bored shitless your rythmes were hitless,
you still aint proved you could even spit this,

this the last line , you see, a just done this and didnt feed one time,

pump = shag

mo' = more

hitless = no good punches


stuff she forgot in bold

and i didnt add it she must have not scroleld up on the wordocument i sent her lol