two new previews feedback would be cool (dial up dl's too)

by **stevethetruth** » Jan 4th, '07, 22:06

just the first verse for both previews any feedback is cool

jealousy
http://www.sendspace.com/file/pi3kb6
or
dial up users- http://www.sendspace.com/file/xyz1l7

random thoughts
http://www.sendspace.com/file/ncqzvg
or
dial up users- http://www.sendspace.com/file/k0280z

oh yeah both songs will be on my next album called hungry for more

by **pawel** » Jan 4th, '07, 22:12

just heard jealousy, the other one is for somebody else:

it wasn't bad, the rap was on the beat

I remember somebody here rapping off the beat so bad

. lyrics were aight too. did you make the beat yourself? it sounded good :8)

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 4th, '07, 22:13

jelousy is kool

random thoughts is one of your best flow wise :smoking:

by **Speech** » Jan 4th, '07, 22:14

likin tha second record a lil mo
soundz a little realer
EDIT: Flow is bedda on second audio

still dat crappy quality hm homeboy you need to change dat with sum sorta program

lyricz great anyway :smoking:

by **stevethetruth** » Jan 4th, '07, 22:15

pawel wrote:just heard jealousy, the other one is for somebody else:

it wasn't bad, the rap was on the beat I remember somebody here rapping off the beat so bad . lyrics were aight too. did you make the beat yourself? it sounded good

lol i wish i made that beat but sadly i didn't lol
i got it off of soundclick
but yeah thanks for checking it out bro

and i'm sure whoever was doing that so offbeat is better now lol

:happy:

by **stevethetruth** » Jan 4th, '07, 22:19

@bar thanks for checking it out lol
and yeah i agree lol

Shadyhomie wrote:likin tha second record a lil mo
soundz a little realer
EDIT: Flow is bedda on second audio

still dat crappy quality hm homeboy you need to change dat with sum sorta program

lyricz great anyway

hmm funny cause i recorded it with a 100 dollar mic hmmm oh well
lol thanks for checking em both out lol
i guess i need someone to clean up my audios for now on lol

by **Speech** » Jan 4th, '07, 22:36

steverocks88 wrote:@bar thanks for checking it out lol
and yeah i agree lol

Shadyhomie wrote:likin tha second record a lil mo
soundz a little realer
EDIT: Flow is bedda on second audio

still dat crappy quality hm homeboy you need to change dat with sum sorta program

lyricz great anyway

hmm funny cause i recorded it with a 100 dollar mic hmmm oh well
lol thanks for checking em both out lol
i guess i need someone to clean up my audios for now on lol

yeah see...it soundz a lil like youre standin in tha last corner of the booth...summdin that 'sticks' your vocals to the beats should help you
just make sumone mix it fo ya homie :happy:

by **stevethetruth** » Jan 5th, '07, 05:33

yeah true but i'm trying to set this setup is sort of walk in closet i have in my room

but nm that
i'll try to get someone to mix my stuff for me lol

by **mart85** » Jan 5th, '07, 05:42

good previews, your flow was great on random thoughts, like bar said, probably your best flow wise... and about your mixing "problem", it sounds like you panned your vocals or used some delay, I don't know... for rap verse, it's better to keep your vocals centered... cause the quality seems nice, it's just a panning problem... and the vocals could be a bit louder lol :happy: