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Postby MoBrat » Jan 6th, '07, 03:28

The First 1: im not a fan of the beat but u flow good 2 it i guess the lyrics are good i like them very short tho...u sound very different then i remember lol

The Second 1:i like the beat its sick good flow good lyrics

overall id say they are really good :thumbsup:

y are they so short?? i think the second 1 could be a good longer song
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Postby stevethetruth » Jan 6th, '07, 05:21

MoBrat wrote:The First 1: im not a fan of the beat but u flow good 2 it i guess the lyrics are good i like them very short tho...u sound very different then i remember lol

The Second 1:i like the beat its sick good flow good lyrics

overall id say they are really good :thumbsup:

y are they so short?? i think the second 1 could be a good longer song


there so short cause there only previews lol
the full time for both tracks should be over 3 minutes

and i sound different ?? lol is that good or bad :p

but yeah thanks for checking em out :D

but yeah thanks for checking em out :D
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Postby MoBrat » Jan 6th, '07, 05:24

steverocks88 wrote:there so short cause there only previews lol
the full time for both tracks should be over 3 minutes

and i sound different ?? lol is that good or bad :p

but yeah thanks for checking em out :D

but yeah thanks for checking em out :D


1. o thats kool pm me when u get a full track plz
2. i think its a good thing but it might be cause im drunk but i like it
3. :laughing: u said the same thing twice lol and no problem i like underground artists better then mainstream artists
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Postby stevethetruth » Jan 6th, '07, 05:34

MoBrat wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:there so short cause there only previews lol
the full time for both tracks should be over 3 minutes

and i sound different ?? lol is that good or bad :p

but yeah thanks for checking em out :D

but yeah thanks for checking em out :D


1. o thats kool pm me when u get a full track plz
2. i think its a good thing but it might be cause im drunk but i like it
3. :laughing: u said the same thing twice lol and no problem i like underground artists better then mainstream artists


wow i must be drunk too huh :laughing:

sure i'll gladly send the full track when it's done
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Postby stevethetruth » Jan 7th, '07, 18:55

bump :8)
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Postby DelinQuent » Jan 10th, '07, 03:38

i like the lyrics for Random Thoughts. your flow is damn good. i don't mean to bring you down, but try to throw yourself into the song. put emotion into every word. overall random thoughts is great, so putting more emotion into your words will only make it better. keep doin your thing
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Postby stevethetruth » Jan 10th, '07, 04:10

DelinQuent wrote:i like the lyrics for Random Thoughts. your flow is damn good. i don't mean to bring you down, but try to throw yourself into the song. put emotion into every word. overall random thoughts is great, so putting more emotion into your words will only make it better. keep doin your thing


your not bringing me down your helping me lol thanks alot for that feed cause i want to know what to improve on :D
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