Infliction (plaspp) vs. Enimee

[Infliction]

Aiight so just 6 bars. No hate, racism, dick riding, etc etc, you know the rules

(Note: Written to the "Make it rain" instrumental)

I spit lyrical fire, runnin' on adrenaline and meskaline
Winners win and sinners sin, if you gotta sin to win, you best be ready to make the sacrifice
I might seem nice to you but I'll take a fuckin knife to you if you fuckin wit me!
Grab a butchers knife and go on a killin' spree, choppin' you down like a maple tree
Im reppin' the maple leaf, red and white, Canada, stand up!
You temporary, Im at the top and I aint never gettin' bumped
Rack yea brain hard kid, dont get stumped
I'll leave you dumped 6 feet, face down wit dirt piled on yea rump (Haha!)
This shit is personal, I'm cardinal to rap, and a general at that
You just a fuckin' rat, rhymin' the same ol' generic rap, that shits just basic
I'll fuckin' waste it, you got no style or flavour, sit back and savour your last minutes of respect
Cuz I'm leavin' you crushed wit nun left

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its sick BUT could you audio it os i can make a full judgment coz you say its written to a beat so i cant comment on flow/structure if not its kool

[Infliction]

i would man, no doubt i would, but i dont have a mic.. im going to TRY and go buy one before the weekend is out but i cant guarentee it, ill do my best though.

[Enimee]

runnin at you wit 16 nines, the administration would neva mix these minds
like G.W.Bush and his cabinet, i got you doubfounded what you grabin at
no war pussys war's for rookies, have your burnt like the bottom of chocolate chip cookies
think ya shook me you better recognize, your just the shredda in disguise
runnin round wit your lil foot clan, you dont know what it took man
for me and my turtles to amass and rise, to fool this bastards guise
hes no G hes more wnna be then my enimee, come on TR who the hell you sendin me
intrepidy rapidly steppin G to rep the street, aint no way this f'in he/she will do shet to me
i cop the bag drop tha phag and grab the mag, go back a page when i was jus a dag-
-on poser and you'll find this guys a spittin image, your weak rhymes make me stronger like spinache
and im papeye no sailor man your a failier and, im a success the best since the rest of the prince
rep new york like my hometown, your jus a pissed off fan of eminem and motown slowdown or get mow'd down

[Infliction]

sick battle man. my vote'd go to you

[Enimee]

id vote you good shit ok Upin For VOTES

[Infliction]

lol, i underestimated you man, if we battle again imma really have to put everythin into it to have a chance. (And no that aint an excuse)

Waitin for votes everyone

[Kez]

Plaspp for wordplay
Enimee for most everything else (hated the chocolate chip cookie line though

Vote: Enimee

[C-Game]

first i will say NO DOUBT both of u guys are favourites for da tournament
Enimeee u are no doubt da biggest rise on TR ive ever seen in da recent past

I rarely vote on battles coz i always break it down really to help da droppers to improvise or da reason to justify my vote

so here goesss

I spit lyrical fire, runnin' on adrenaline and meskaline
Winners win and sinners sin, if you gotta sin to win, you best be ready to make the sacrifice

Plassp Start was just awesome
i was pumped aftr those 2 lines
but unfortuantley da rest of da 4 lines lacked punches ,only buildin up him self
no prominent complexity through out

A hard out punch was delivered in line 8

I'll leave you dumped 6 feet, face down wit dirt piled on yea rump

da endin was ok tooo


Now Enimees


runnin at you wit 16 nines, the administration would neva mix these minds

nice liked it a lot
OH P.S Lyrical Warfare help
writin conventions help u tooo re-write it like this if u want to help better illustration of multies

runnin at you wit sixteen-nines, the administration would neva mix-these-minds

oki back to da breakin down

another line i liked

no war pussys war's for rookies, have your burnt like the bottom of chocolate chip cookies

good metaz here and a nice multie (amass-and-rise bastards-guise)

runnin round wit your lil foot clan, you dont know what it took man
for me and my turtles to amass and rise, to fool this bastards guise

ninja turtle fan eh

intrepidy rapidly steppin G to rep the street, aint no way this f'in he/she will do shet to me

nice line
good complexity wit inbuilt multies and rhymes and da gender confusion is cool too


and im papeye no sailor man your a failier and, im a success the best since the rest of the prince
rep new york like my hometown, your jus a pissed off fan of eminem and motown slowdown or get mow'd down

again some nice multies and a good punch to end da show

Final Vote

Ill say Enimee due to better rhymes better multies better punches , metas , got personal
plassp had a good flow but ur structure was off
some times da syllables were too many for a bar but i cant judge dat without hearin audio


PlassP got potential as i read his old battle with Kblock
anyway both these forces will be huge in LYRICAL WARFARE

LET DA GAMES BEGIN COMMENCIN TONIGHT

GRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Infliction]

haha, nice thanks for votin guys, but kez who was ur vote for overall?

[MoBrat]

I Vote Enimee cause he had rhymes that caught my attention he also had multies/personals/punches/enjoyment

plassp i liked the rhyme but once again ur structure was off u had creativity tho....i've seen a lot of better stuff from u but....good battle 2 both

[Enimee]

ok i guess that makes me winner by KO...my first KO ever really i mean against someone with talent (mobrat diss lmao)

[Infliction]

good battle man, i hope to battle you in the tourney, you got skill, i like the challenge