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new song READY- PmT

Postby Vettori » Jan 21st, '07, 23:46

The quality is garbage i know but i like the way it turned out... put quite a bit into it......ill post lyrics in a minute Leave feedback thx

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 21st, '07, 23:52

tracks pretty good...the quality ruins the chorus and i feel as if you cant really put emotionin coz of the quality :sweating: the second verse go's up and down in the volume, the beats kool and flow is real good...just need to try get your quality up :sweating:
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Postby $0 R3@L » Jan 21st, '07, 23:53

man the quality is well bad....which is a shock for u cause your sound was usually 100%

content wise its dope.Flow sounds nice man.Lyrics sounds pretty good wut i cud make out.Hook is pretty strong.

8/10

audio quaility is -1/10

gud to see u bak around doin audio :8) :)
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Postby Vettori » Jan 21st, '07, 23:55

READY-PmT

Chorus-

I try not to cry a full blooded warrior seeking to die
off of blood its with me pockets empty here by my side
aint holdin out now your threw you tried but we take no bribes
these 6 guys we literally ride till we die


Verse 1-

Got that diamond crusader, Related to his behavior. cant break it.
it's so much greater, be afraid cause this man's Crazy
Raised in a semi terminal home with 6 friends Been gettin mad respect latley
We die Bloodys to the end.No worries now the splitta come to put a bounty out
Pockets empty unleashed if your friends nothin to worry about
We just can't stand he's so sick he rides a nice car.
The white t dot O future landin football star ?
Oh yea we can't forget that kid nef he's doin good
Fuck wit one fuck wit all Were considered our own hood
Look if you need to settle sumtin break bread wit the devils
I smell a need of appreciation 6 rebels
we sneak around endless with a bored sanctum of life.
Wheres the excitement when you need it.catch a train and just ride
Till you die no lookin back start off new.It's frightnin in your eyes
It's our day to day thing you could never survive

Verse 2-

for those who notice nothing never budging, stuck in a trance
left to stand without bones, drained and fortuned that in advanced
how many have had the chance a battle ready to shatter
ran into a berage of flustering shit, gettin louder
blink sleeping, unfortunate post and now we toast to leaders
visionaries coincidential are millitary treaters
were here to obtain a certain wish, uncertainty comes with this gift
Unseen to mans eyes what comes to follow a List
Of commands, try what some threw to swallow a fist
a brick heavy lift have you drift of in a gaze it's a trick
Can't dodge a bullet were 6 loaded and shot
Don't get caught with pockets empty and bloat what youve got
Or you'll get knocked
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Postby Vettori » Jan 21st, '07, 23:57

Thx alot quality really ruined it, but im Poor as shit, so i dont complain :P
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Postby $0 R3@L » Jan 22nd, '07, 01:02

Faith99 wrote:Thx alot quality really ruined it, but im Poor as shit, so i dont complain :P


u dont need to be rich bruv.....just save up your wages and go broke for a month,wut i done.
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Postby Vettori » Jan 22nd, '07, 01:05

$0 R3@L wrote:
Faith99 wrote:Thx alot quality really ruined it, but im Poor as shit, so i dont complain :P


u dont need to be rich bruv.....just save up your wages and go broke for a month,wut i done.


Funny thing about that lol. I dont even have a job. I'm in the works of gettin onen ow. But failure happens more then success.
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Postby $0 R3@L » Jan 22nd, '07, 01:34

Faith99 wrote:
$0 R3@L wrote:
Faith99 wrote:Thx alot quality really ruined it, but im Poor as shit, so i dont complain :P


u dont need to be rich bruv.....just save up your wages and go broke for a month,wut i done.


Funny thing about that lol. I dont even have a job. I'm in the works of gettin onen ow. But failure happens more then success.


i sign on...like social security...i dunno wut u guys call it....its still possbile to save....lmao i dunno just mis your old quality.....wut happend wit that dude who used to produce your tracks?
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Postby Vettori » Jan 22nd, '07, 01:58

He's kcikin wit his crew third strypes, it's just Getting to his place, I don't always have time to go as far as he lives. certain buses stop runnin at like 8, and im usually there at 10..walking home from anothercity takes to long, done it 3 times max lol .....Im gonna redo this with more time and better quality soon enuff, Just not now lol
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Postby $0 R3@L » Jan 22nd, '07, 02:05

Faith99 wrote:He's kcikin wit his crew third strypes, it's just Getting to his place, I don't always have time to go as far as he lives. certain buses stop runnin at like 8, and im usually there at 10..walking home from anothercity takes to long, done it 3 times max lol .....Im gonna redo this with more time and better quality soon enuff, Just not now lol


lol i hear ya.

but man i really hope ya do attempt better quality cause this would be sick if you had your old quality back.But man even still its better then some stuff posted on ere so props man and great job :worship: :worship: :worship: :)
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Postby Vettori » Jan 22nd, '07, 02:15

Thx I appreciate it alot :P
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Postby randomghost » Jan 22nd, '07, 11:02

nice song, the beat is ok but the quality ruin the whole shit,, anyways nice work :8)
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Postby Vettori » Jan 23rd, '07, 03:48

Thx for all the comments

"BUMP"
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Postby Vettori » Jan 24th, '07, 02:44

Bump 1 more time :D
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 24th, '07, 02:47

a tip when posting man

zshare = lot more comments

coz i think hoopz started using ti eveyrone got used to it and now its like aww i need to donwload just stream it on share lol :sweating:
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