So Real Vs Hayzi

[$0 R3@L]

u spit first ....i want that crown

btw everyone before we start,if you think my rap is shit ok but dont all post rubbish.I know i aint that good cause im new to it all.Please look for my good points and point out what i could do to improve.A battle with a big cat like hayzi will help me develop big time

[HAYZI]

its your challenge dawg so you gotta spit first



and btw i only been rap battlin about 2 months

[$0 R3@L]

ok ill go first

ive been spitting for two weeks

[HAYZI]

...............................

when your ready

[HAYZI]

ill hit it a little while hes off to write his riddle
to give us a giggle, spittin wrong, rhymes we want not dribble
im sick of your drivel, snivellin fool u ready for skool
im givin u lessons this is a blessin to get rid of your drool

i duck and dive im covered whichever way he goes
i dont play u kno ready for a T.K.O?
now boy start rollin widda punches, ive punchlines like stoners got the munchies
i manipulate words like old gits do with countries, like goerge bush does, now u know what a cunt is?

i give u a grillin leave u with liver-a spillin
like a river to swim-in, wipe the floor wit ur hair leave u shiver and tinglin
u singled me out, ur fickle like a wrestlin bout
ill 'fess im about breakin the heart in your chest wit no doubt

u want the crown son u got sum work to do,
cos i been there done that got the shirt my dude
and im bigger and better wot, u figured id let up?
no ***** ur setup, give your doctor a ring get a check up


yeh thought id jus drop soince ur a beginner, and so real dont think this is the best we got to offer this is just playin

[$0 R3@L]

you smell that, that the smell of fear
this punk ass queer is more woman then mrs spears
already this bitch fears i might take his crown
why he telling me he do better in the second round

every word his spit, every rhyme his written
just make he head get big, yo this bitch be all smitten
im a lion dawg and your a weak kitten
my rhymes hit harder cause none of them be pre-written

you be talking all this gangsta shit
but weve done seen your just a wanksta bitch prick
i spit bout my life you spit bout what youve seen in the movies
ive been beat up for being white, been aimed at with a uzi

get your own dick out your ass you prick
stop riding on it be getting pleasure of'a it
and go stick your head up your ass, and see if it fit.

[wildrabbit]

Watch out Hayzi, battling this dude is asking for the neverending-boreme.

[$0 R3@L]

run away rabbit ive already fucked you in a lyrical bliss

[HAYZI]

lol
1 not a single rhyme of mine is prewritten
2 whats with copyin other ppls rhymes that movie line i think em young used (+rhymed it with uzi too)
and 3 whats with the missin line at the bottom??



props tho for doin your thing

[Coccoa]

What that nizzle is copying me? I am famous??

[$0 R3@L]

i got it from 50,erm the song title down cum to mind but it one of my faviourte 50 lines.

thanks for the props.....as for the missing line,i think i done it as i wanted to end the spit different....like the next lines yet to come.In freestyle their isnt like a rule to how to shape your lyrics,theres guides but no rules.If there is i just changed em

again thanks for the props and props for doing yo thang

[HAYZI]

well you shoulnt be takin lines from 50

and standardly its 16 lines

and that wasnt freestyle u left for an hour to write that lol



shall we get sum votes in then???

[AspirinE]

i got it from 50,erm the song title down cum to mind but it one of my faviourte 50 lines.

thanks for the props.....as for the missing line,i think i done it as i wanted to end the spit different....like the next lines yet to come.In freestyle their isnt like a rule to how to shape your lyrics,theres guides but no rules.If there is i just changed em

again thanks for the props and props for doing yo thang

The Force is strong with u

nice battle

keep practicing So real

Vote:Hayzi

[$0 R3@L]

thanks aspirine

hayzi i didnt go away to write that shit,i went to watch football on telly (real madrid) infact.I dont need to go write then check 100 times and even run spell check ,all my shit be striaght of my head as i post reply.

As for the we cant use 50 lines i didnt.I took his line and made it my own.I didnt just straight copy it.I took it and made it fit my personality and my rhyme.

Nuff times em takes a 50 / tony yayo etc line and incorparate his own spin/version of it.

as for the 16well i didnt know that,but i think thats a bullshit rule anyhows.I mean if you are proper freestyler you just spit till you done spitting whether that be 6 or 60 lines.


i am glad no one has dissed me as a newbie yet ,i just wanna learn and someday be listed amongst the greatest freestlyers on tr next to fordie the king champ ,lol.He is good though

[Coccoa]

Yeah well...kinda felt Real's shit....i dunno about Hayzi....i vote for Real.