Ground Zero---First Leak

by **MoBrat** » Jan 24th, '07, 02:35

this is my new track called Ground Zero it's the first leaked track off my new album Ground Zero (lol im so creative) and yes it is kinda sketchy i didn't have time 2 re-record the first part... my 3RD verus is the best but 1 of my fav parts is around 1:39 where i say: hahaha it's over -- in a devil type of voice i dont know y this small part catches my attention
http://www.sendspace.com/file/ghtzp6

FEED PLZ

by **randomghost** » Jan 24th, '07, 02:37

props for that, the track is sick, flow is hot and speedy, i liked it, keep up the good work :worship:

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 24th, '07, 02:42

uhm ok well it dont sound like flow :unsure:

its like fast talking :sweating:

lyrics kool , quality better than before :worship:

, mixing could be better just on volume you go below the beat and some bits :sweating:

the second verses flow is better but it still dont sound like rapping you emphasize ryhmes or nothing :sweating:

just work on that it could be a sick as fuck track :sweating:

by **Vettori** » Jan 24th, '07, 02:43

recording Tip: First off not bad I see better in you tho.....Ummm Try to memorize your verses before yu record...So you can add the feeling...Cause it sounds like your reading from a peace of paper....You sound real nervous as well..I can here the muttering in ur voice...Youse adlibs....and when making a chorus layer up on it.....Will sound way better youll be more satisfying....try not to make it sound like your trying to rap to rhyme......Everyone has something to say....say what yu want them to hear...You being a recording artist Puts you on the pedestal to speak..real recognition will come out of it..Hope i wasn't to detailed for ya......Pce :P

by **MoBrat** » Jan 24th, '07, 02:45

wow thanks 4 all the info/feed ppl :worship:

this is only a draft it's not the final version so i will take those tips into mind when re-recording it

by **$0 R3@L** » Jan 24th, '07, 02:58

well i fink the flow is dope....ok there wernt much feelin in your sound but your just starting out so u expect that.

You ask me this is better then peeps on ere who been doin it longer,so great job :worship:

your lyrics are dope,the beat was ok i liek the deep sound it had.

My only suggests would be like pmt sed,memorize your words so it aint got a 'reading' sound....but damn great start :worship:

by **MoBrat** » Jan 24th, '07, 03:00

kool thanks 4 the feed $0 R3@L i appreciate it

by **em16** » Jan 24th, '07, 12:13

wow MoBrat... the track is awsome... i love it... :worship:

holla at me...

Ground Zero---First Leak

Ground Zero---First Leak

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