untitled(with lyrics) (added a z share link)

[stevethetruth]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/steve-mp3-bv0.html
or
http://www.sendspace.com/file/z7v8eq
mixed by mc maybe
wma verison

it's not fully mixed only has the first verse but other than that here you go

here's the lyrics if you can't understand it like bar lol


Chorus:
When we kiss when we hug it all takes me by a mile
Whatever you wish it

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

cant hear you well enough man and ZSHARE

[stevethetruth]

screw z share lol

and idk i heard myself fine lol if everyone complains about it i'll just take the link down

[Speech]

i like the mixin'
the vocals are a lil low aren't they...

but i like it anywaez....nice lyricz.....cool affects in the vocz^^



keep it up homiezz^

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

screw z share lol

and idk i heard myself fine lol if everyone complains about it i'll just take the link down

i can hear you but your really quite and thre sample in the beat so it dont help also thats one BIG chorus

[stevethetruth]

lol thanks and yeah i know if makes it harder to hear and i know there's a long ass chorus i only did that cause of the way the beat was set up yo know

[Coccoa]

Call it puppy love.

[$0 R3@L]

Call it puppy love.

aint that the old 70's song from that dude band????

[mart85]

yeah you REALLY need to solve that mic problem, like I talked to you about last time lol... that phase problem... on some sound systems, you may hear the voice well, but on other, you almost can't hear anything lol... I think if you record in MONO, you shouldn't have that problem

but as far as the song, it's hard to judge properly lol, but it seems good... your flow was great, except on some parts that it was slightly off... in the chorus, everything seems fine, except that line: "Baby we have such a blast together always a breeze ", I think you could make it flow better, it sounded like you rushed it a bit... but yeah, nice song, just solve that mic problem, and it'll help a LOT lol

[Coccoa]

Call it puppy love.

aint that the old 70's song from that dude band????

Wouldnt call em exactly "dude" band, but it was an ok song. Sampleable.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Call it puppy love.

aint that the old 70's song from that dude band????

Wouldnt call em exactly "dude" band, but it was an ok song. Sampleable.

also a 50 cent song and a s club junoirs song and some guy donny osmand or something had a song by that name

[Coccoa]

Sounds popular.

[stevethetruth]

yeah you REALLY need to solve that mic problem, like I talked to you about last time lol... that phase problem... on some sound systems, you may hear the voice well, but on other, you almost can't hear anything lol... I think if you record in MONO, you shouldn't have that problem

but as far as the song, it's hard to judge properly lol, but it seems good... your flow was great, except on some parts that it was slightly off... in the chorus, everything seems fine, except that line: "Baby we have such a blast together always a breeze ", I think you could make it flow better, it sounded like you rushed it a bit... but yeah, nice song, just solve that mic problem, and it'll help a LOT lol

yeah i know lol i haven't really had the time to record anything lately lol
and yeah i agree that line could flow better lol

i'll try recording in mono and see how it goes

thanks for being the only one taking this song seriously besides bar and shadyhomie lol

[Rae]

i liked it.

it sounded like it was the girl's song tho. and u were rappin in tha background. and its suppost 2 b tha otha way around.

the song is good tho!

keep it up hunn!

[stevethetruth]

lmao thanks rae

and yeah i'll get that fixed if i decide i want it on a album but right now it's staying as is