Feed On Rain

by **Rain Matrix** » Jan 25th, '07, 23:08

pillars.mp3 - 1.76MB

Is this better

by **Kez** » Jan 25th, '07, 23:45

It's alright but you maintain the same tone through the song and you sound bored. :unsure:

Not bad for a first attempt (if this is your first)

by 4D » Jan 26th, '07, 00:33

I like it man, you're not too bad at all. And the rhymes do come off a lot better in audio than text, the flow is a little weird though, kinda sounds like you make a slight pause after every word, which is the way your rhymes are wrote too though, so it's cool. This track is pretty promising from you man, you should post some more audios.